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Nightmares

It is a turquoise lake oval in shape
The blue boat is almost a cylinder  
Hills and fountains in the landscape
A white and gold cloud resembles her

I start rowing the boat slowly
Ripples in the water smile at me
The wind turns a little breezy
The cloud sounds a little breathy

I row up to the eastern bank
The orange of the sun fondles my face
I row down to the western flank
The cloud says, the sun I'll replace

Suddenly a lion shaped big figure
With a sparkling knife in its lifted claw
A horrific outcry of yellow anger
A violent pose to overawe

I get hysteric calling my mother
Whose voice descends into the sky
Don't panic I am driving away the monster
I woke up and saw on my hands a giant fly


January 24, 2018
Nightmares - Poetry Contest
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Date: 1/26/2018 7:17:00 AM
- A really scary night ... I had got panic ... :) - Lively written, Probir - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine ...
Date: 1/25/2018 2:57:00 PM
loved the classic style of this wonderful poetry.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Harry ...
Date: 1/25/2018 12:10:00 AM
If it is a true story, YIKEs. To wake up and see a giant fly on your hand.I enjoyed this one!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 1/24/2018 5:15:00 PM
A giant fly? You poor boy.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2018 7:33:00 AM
Hahaha ... thank you, Jean ...

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