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Nightmare Image of Lies

Image of Lies I lay asleep in bed wanting to sneak away, splitting the curtains of chagrin reflection, hue colored rainbows of dawn to bleak dark sunlight. Instead I find myself in a cold confined labyrinth. In sorrow turned adrift wraith shadows in black mourning; paralyzed in fear my screams erupted no one turned no one heard. Rage assails no reason. Tortured dreams hard to wake from screams and fear suppressed. Grieve, I am trying so hard to put behind me. I awake slumber some and walk into the room they are in black mourning. My body's soul had left me lying in bed while it wandered. Thoughts of my state almost despising where image dream of lies grievous mania strives. 1/22/2018 revised

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Date: 1/29/2018 10:37:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win with this murky, edgy piece! Well done! Thanks also for your comments at my entry. :) Bartholomew
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Date: 1/29/2018 8:07:00 PM
Ooh, I love this one, Eve, so shadowy but glinted with touches of light, (like a night sky through fog) ... absolutely captivating and powerful! Congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 1/29/2018 7:44:00 PM
Deep, dark and well-written, Eve. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/29/2018 6:53:00 PM
Well done, Eve! Congratulations on your win! ...Fran
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Date: 1/29/2018 4:18:00 PM
Back as expected to congratulate you, Eve. Superbly done.
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:51:00 PM
such a dark deep write Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:24:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your win. With Lots Of Love *SKAT*
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Date: 1/23/2018 8:32:00 PM
A deep, dark and dramatic write Eve. Your imagination is quite vibrant and intriguing.. A captivating poem.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 1/23/2018 9:37:00 AM
A deep, yet well written description of how nightmares can be Eve. :)
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:44:00 AM
The incarnation of fear, yet, when soul is involved fear should dissipate for light follows! Captivating dear, Eve!
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:24:00 AM
Nightmare of nightmares..well penned imagination..best for a win, Eve.
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:17:00 AM
This is scary and very dark and deep... I see your pen can write so many different kind of poems..
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Date: 1/23/2018 6:28:00 AM
Very vivid. A great write. I'll be back for well deserved congrats...
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Date: 1/23/2018 12:55:00 AM
Oh this is very dark, and Gothic, I love the imagery you have used eve! Great write!
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