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Nightmare

Falling into space, Awakening from a dream. A scream caught in throat, Nothing is as it may seem Waiting for fear to subside.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 5:11:00 PM

Another great write. The worst nightmare I ever has was when I was eleven. I had a dream I was trapped in a fire and burning.

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2010 9:56:00 AM

Super Tanka Francine. My second oldest son suffered from nightmares until just recently. He's 19 now, and for years he initially seen a hand coming through the ceiling towards him to the presence eventually standing by his bed. It's not happened for a few months now. Hopefully this episode has passed > thank you for your always kind comments >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 9:05:00 PM

what a great tanka, Francine. Nice to read your poetry tonight. LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 7/14/2010 2:59:00 PM

Falling! Falling! I used to have this sort of dream all the time. Then, one night, I told myself "You can fly." When the dream came on I took off. Never have had that dream since. My sympathy. This sort of dream is frightening - so real! Love, Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2010 9:27:00 AM

I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Francine and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol

Michael Gelb

Date: 7/13/2010 6:47:00 PM

Good.

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2010 5:41:00 PM

A NASTY NIGHTMARE IT MUST HAVE BEEN/// LIKED THE THIRD LINE- HOW YOU PUT IT "SCREAM CAUGHT IN A THROAT", NICE// ENJOYED YOUR WRITE- SKAT