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Nightfall

The shy sun withdraws behind purple hills
As the dark sky lights up with silvery stars.
Oh, what beautiful scene, it fills me with thrills.
 
I go my way amongst the winding narrow paths
Of the dimly lit quaint houses of the small haven.
Breath-taking vista, night after night it lasts.

Soon I betake myself to my most popular tavern.
My stomach rumbles a bit with lack of food.
The Italian chef beams at me, twirling his moustache,
“What speciality shall we serve you, what is your mood?”

I decide to let the famous chef choose for me.
I know his tastes as he knows what I need.
Suddenly I hear of an ethereal tune of the deep sea,
As my charming Martha comes with her romantic song.
Ah, my sweet fantasies and yearning affections
Send me to seventh heaven as she twirls her skirt so long.

The meal I eat as I watch her dance.  But soon
Her lavender fragrance fills me with joyous call.
All is quiet as she sits on my lap, such is our nightfall. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 4:43 AM
It must have been heavenly ! The intoxicating ambiance, the bewitching music and dance, the food so palatable to your mouth and to top it all the serpentine beauty on your lap.... ! Belle and beauty, glamour and romance, a wonderful combination !!
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 12:21 PM
- A wonderful romantic moment ... beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:30 AM
A brilliant poem, Victor:) great use of loving images:)
Ball Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 4:32 AM
This is lovely Victor. I can see you walking the quiet streets to your favorite tavern for a meal. I see the lovely girl dancing and almost hear the music. Beautiful imagery and a very peaceful feel to this. Well done. God Bless, JB
Edmonds  Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:32 PM
A lovely sunset at the start of a wonderful, enjoyable night Victor, fantastic imagism… Belle
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 10:10 AM
a beautiful scene you created. I like it better than the sailing scene since it involved food and dance!
Roper Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Italian sounds good. Great write :)
Eslinger Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Victor! Moving with you in this marvel, sensing the night, the sight of hills, stars, paths, people. Feeling like I were there! Could see the chef and a menu, see Martha, too! A great trip for me. Thank you! Xoxo. sally
Buehler Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 12:45 PM
I love opening and closing lines of this poetic delight, Victor. Have a nice weekend, Evelyn :)
Skelly Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Nicely done Victor...Delice
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 9:22 AM
You have a wild imagination , Victor, and it serves you well, in poetry and in life, well done :)
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 8:58 AM
I adore the opening line and the personification of the sun, a joy to read Victor as ive said before you are a very gifted storyteller in your lovely poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Poet Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Victor, your night ended brilliantly, as far as I can tell. My favorite aspect of your story is how you use nature to construct a love and fantasy story set in fragrant dusk. You've also done an excellent job with nightfall.
Horsman Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Yes i'm there with you Victor, you write it so real.
Pandit Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 5:53 AM
A story of love and fantasy in fragrant yearning--what a lovely nightfall, Victor. I can see and feel every detail you created in this poem. Well done, as always.
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 5:44 AM
I love how you paint nature in this one and embrace love and life. So wonderful you have enjoyed such. I envy you.
Cunningham Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Sounds like an incredible night Victor with a perfect ending. Tom
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