Nightfall

It's ok to cry
If you feel dead inside
And you have run out of hiding places 
That can lift and warm your pride
From the swings and slides
That use to be fairground rides
Way back when you where 10
And you believed in bogeymen 
It's lonely on the naughty step
Without someone to tell you
Or protected you
From that what which 
Lies beyond the comfort of home
And destiny and fate
The question of whether its to late
Time will tell and only know 
As along we go the path and crossroad 
We follow in hope
Like soap dangling from a threadbare rope
At best to cope or knot a hangman noose
To stretch around one's neck
And the vultures to peck
The bones and brittle flesh
We laid to rest
In the jailed nest
We created for ourselves 
Because we somehow got lost along the way
And could not make it back
Before night fell
Welcome inside the human mind
A life sentence prison hell
On which to dwell 
The photo albums of missing youth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/30/2021 3:17:00 PM
Excellent details, nicely done!
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/30/2021 3:25:00 PM
Cheers Diane Thank you very much for taking your time out to read this poem of mine and comment. Much obliged and appreciate it greatly. Can't or don't even remember this when in fact it was actually written. May I ask why in fact this 1 out of all the others
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