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Night Visits To a Vile Place

Each night when darkness falls 
I'm plagued by terror and turmoil
vexed in a crazed state of slumber
tossing and turning, my life in crux
chafed and chased in turbulent dreams

It always begins when I close my eyes
and sense a lurking shadowed presence 
I see the outline of the grayling's jaw, 
square and strong but flawed by pock marks, 
like deep craters from the fire pits of hell.

Overbearing is the heat from flames
thrown from his wicked tongue.
They delve deeply to the core of me
with curses that scorch and burn.
They've left me scarred with jagged lines
that he traces with knobby fingers.

"What is this vile place of darkness?"

I scream in agony, born of fear
but there are no ears to hear my pleas.
My cries for help are never heard
but resound rapidly all around my head.
Darkness conceals his face and form
but his beastly shadow hovers over me
as I sit, cringing against the wall.

In a voice now raspy and weak,
I gasp for one more breath.
Clinging frantically to hope of escape, 
but I find no manner of breaking free.
My arms and legs are bound in chains,
blood flows like tears from my lips.
I bit through the skin when I gave in.

By morning I wake, dampened in sweat,
stiff and sore with every move I make
as though I had been crudely used...
abused as if I were a cheap whore.

Memories linger and there's no peace
for my day is spent in dread of night
when I'll be locked in chains once more.
I search for the key to unlock my prison
an illusive key that I may never find.


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       9/19/2017
In The Dark Contest
Host: Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sergi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Beautifully done eerie poem. My compliments!
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Coming back with congratulations, and yeah Art and I will keep those lights on.
Crasta Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Lin, Have you really experienced this boogey woogey man. I have in some way too in my poem Frankenstein. But now he no longer bothers me. I think I am some what free from this shadow
Lane Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:21 PM
No, Venetia... none of it's true. Glad you no longer have such dreams. Thanks for the comments.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 4:27 AM
Congratulation, Lin on your great win.
Lane Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, Subimal.
La France Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Lin, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this outstanding and beautifully penned poem!
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:25 AM
I thank you most sincerely, Constance ';-)
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 8:09 AM
dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:24 AM
Thank you for a return visit and congrats, Jan.
Cozart Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Congrats, Lin!
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so very much, Dale.
Warrior Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Congrats!!! on 2'nd place my friend...nice place to vist...but don't want to live there lol...best wishes Lin...^WW^
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Thanks very much, J. I really didn't want to visit but sleep does have its way with us. Those congrats are coming back at you. I'll be over to read yours in a bit.
White Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:50 AM
I know that so well.... Good luck in the contest, Lin
Lane Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:09 AM
You and Arthur need to keep your lights turned on, Darren. I don't like the dark. Thanks so much.
Parker Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:46 PM
very dark poetry, great imagery, wanted it to continue...good luck, I believe you have a winner
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Thank you very much, Frederic. I'm afraid it IS dark, so I hope she finds that key to unlock her conscience.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 2:57 PM
So Dark! :o a thrill to read xomo
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Thanks a lot, Mo xo
Smith Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Wow Lin...that was intense...we are on similar wavelengths today
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 4:31 PM
We were thinking alike, Tim, but yours has a happier ending. Thanks!
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Such dark deep chilling imagery Lin, I hope i can sleep after reading your terrifying poem I may have to sleep with a light on:-( hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Bob will protect you. Russell asked for dark and that grayling creature lurks in shadows. lol Thanks...strange day...I transition from writing about a flower to telling a beastly tale.
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