Night Tour

Then there is the night
with its backstreets of characters,
masked, intractable, unwilling 
to leave the comfort of their
lifelong haunts. They call out
then turn away in fear
of being known.

And below, the corridors
of the underground winding through 
sleepless hours, 
the constant echo of footsteps 
and voices punctured
by announcements of departures
to nameless places. Images cast
on grimey walls passing in haste,
doors slamed shut.

Nothing sutures together, 
consciousness becomes fragments 
glimpsed on screens, 
splintered sounds,
words finding no meaning.
And having brought you here
what can I offer you
but the pricked chill 
of an anesthetic
being eased into a vein, 
the oblivion of dreamless sleep,
then daybreak bleeding through
the stuck lid of an eye,
the first thin incision of hope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 5/3/2023 6:42:00 AM
Reads like a scene from my previous life, Paul. "the pricked chill of an anesthetic being eased into a vein" too familiar. I enjoyed my tour of your night, Paul. Have a great day
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/3/2023 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, appreciate your comments. Hasten to mention that reference to anesthetic has a medical connotation, exploration of mind state resembling recovering from anaesthesia. Take care...value your support.
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