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Night Tour

Then there is the night with its backstreets of characters, masked, intractable, unwilling to leave the comfort of their lifelong haunts. They call out then turn away in fear of being known. And below, the corridors of the underground winding through sleepless hours, the constant echo of footsteps and voices punctured by announcements of departures to nameless places. Images cast on grimey walls passing in haste, doors slamed shut. Nothing sutures together, consciousness becomes fragments glimpsed on screens, splintered sounds, words finding no meaning. And having brought you here what can I offer you but the pricked chill of an anesthetic being eased into a vein, the oblivion of dreamless sleep, then daybreak bleeding through the stuck lid of an eye, the first thin incision of hope.

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Date: 5/3/2023 7:00:00 AM
What pleasure and pain comes from reading your poetry Paul. You have incredible talent but the poetry obviously comes from authenticity. I travel within your poems in whatever form you describe, see the sights, feel the emotion on a viseral level. The chaos and confusion of the underground where fragments only are visible making for a fearful ride that saps the strength. Absolute brilliance in writing, I only wish it was complete fiction. Thank you for sharing your incredible talent
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/3/2023 4:52:00 PM
I shrink from such praise DD...but grateful that my poetry finds a sympathetic and appreciative ear. I take my poetry into some strange places at times but sense others know the exact same landscape and this is reassuring. Take care and again, thankyou.
Date: 5/3/2023 6:42:00 AM
Reads like a scene from my previous life, Paul. "the pricked chill of an anesthetic being eased into a vein" too familiar. I enjoyed my tour of your night, Paul. Have a great day
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/3/2023 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, appreciate your comments. Hasten to mention that reference to anesthetic has a medical connotation, exploration of mind state resembling recovering from anaesthesia. Take care...value your support.

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