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Night Time Thoughts

Darkness fallen, the sky shines, Stars twinkle and dance Floating silently along the milky way in twisty lines Scattered around, millions to see Stardust tossed on a black canvas Painted, a beautiful breathtaking picture A soft, calming power it holds Losing every worry among diamonds Getting lost in the sea, swimming in a daze The world is quiet, peaceful at this time No noise or fighting, just soft breathing of innocents. But all too soon it starts to leave The sky begins to light; the break of dawn kills all beauty Dead of night is drifting away Pain fills the world once again The fighting begins once more It’s just a circle, constantly moving. Day and night in a constant battle Light; constant, never enough Dark; slow, peaceful and safe La nuit prend lentement le monde…

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Date: 11/12/2015 11:38:00 PM
i am so absorbed with this. keep it up! :)
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Date: 10/23/2015 7:44:00 PM
The night slowly takes the world. La nuit prend lentement le monde.Pain fills the world once again. Douleur remplit une fois de plus le monde . Do not worry, there is always tomorrow.
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:58:00 AM
- Hello Cheylynn :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:43:00 PM
This is a splendid first impression of such talent. I am impressed with the use superbly vivid imagery, with how soothing the beauty of the night, darkness and light are, and many other things. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 10/15/2015 11:32:00 AM
Hi Cheylynn, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:51:00 PM
Cheylynn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:37:00 PM
such a Beautiful grasp of above....Light is what so many Love....dark is so calm and serene....and these are some of most Beautiful words I have ever seen....;)
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:30:00 PM
Now this is a poem I like, love writing about night how peaceful it is. A great poem you have written can't wait to read more from you. Welcome to poetry soup.
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