Night Song

Night song Pulls my heartstrings Luna, stars SYMPHONY Lullabying the world to sleep Sweet dreams
18th May 2023 Contest: Song of my heart Sponsor: JCB Brul
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Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Jo, such wonderful images and a soothing lullaby. I love the last line that wishes "sweet dreams" to all of us. So well penned. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of sweet lullabies to you!
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:09 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest "Song of my heart", Jo :) - hugs
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Very sweet creative poem, Dear Jo. Congratulations on POTW.
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 2:22 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Jo :) - hugs
Meadows Avatar
May 25, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 3:05 PM
so sweet. I liked how you used lullabye as a verb! Congrats on the POTW I see you got.
Meadows Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 9:36 PM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! Moving and delightful Cinquain. Paulette
Pandit Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 4:51 AM
BIG congrats on POTW, Jo. Nicely delivered. Enjoy your special week.
Nicole Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 1:24 PM
I love everything about the stars, and the melody that curls around the night sky. My favorite time, when all the world is asleep. Your thoughts are beautiful in every way. Congratulations Joanna, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Awwww, a beautiful sweet symphony! Congratulations Jo, on the honour of POTW.
La France Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Jo, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor !
Baker Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your POTW honor, Joanna. Very soothing verse. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kitchin Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 4:43 AM
Joanna, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTW!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 1:55 AM
Joanna, beautiful words, congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the week… Belle
Deschler Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:06 PM
This wonderful poem has a catchy rhythm to it, like the chorus in a song... Very well written, Joanna... My best wishes for the contest!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:24 AM
A symphony not to be forgotten. Great to fall asleep with such a song in our minds.
Peck Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:20 PM
A lovely, peaceful poem, Joanna. Best of luck!
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Ahhh!!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Mcintosh Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Wonderful words... beautiful. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:46 AM
- Lovely written, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:08 AM
A lovely titbit. Best for a win.
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