Night So Mysterious

Translucent waves – deepest of pool – Mirroring unto the sentient pewter , and yet Through the gloss, a flit, a rush: A shdowed trace from hidden bush! And in the night forest awakens light Quietly spreading a velvet robe; The mist weaving embroidered fabric – When new stars peep mysteriously. Tints of dawn arrive; imbuing stillness around; It gifted the sun another mirthful twirl. And night ebbed, unable to disown hours' reign Warming the fete that gives out eve's pageantry. Mysterious Night Contest Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron 8/7/2017
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Date: 8/23/2017 12:43:00 PM
Ya..agree with the night has some moments where it is so unpredictable and secretive. You expressed it so well. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/23/2017 12:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Nice.
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Date: 8/8/2017 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful lines Nette in this lovely poem of yours. Good luck in the contest....Maria
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Date: 8/7/2017 1:28:00 PM
You have certainly made the night mysterious in your beautiful poem Best of Luck in the contest, nette.!
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:03:00 PM
- Yes, it's beautiful, mysterious ... and scary dangerous, Nette - When the star is shining on the sky with you ... the sun is shining on my sky :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:23:00 AM
To me, this is the most imaginative idea for the theme. I would think of horror or suspense regarding mentioned topic. Excellently designed in gentle, mysterious manner!
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:06:00 AM
Good luck with contest!
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:56:00 AM
Yeah, the night holds a mystery, beautifully said, Nette:)
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful lines in this poem for the contest Nette. :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 3:59:00 AM
The mystery ter of night, wow yes great idea, and I admire how u begin the poem ' under the crescent moon,'. Great imagery n choicest wording. Nice to read from u again. Pls do write your thoughts about my latest poem too, under it.
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