Night Sky Musing

I looked up to the sky tonight and it was velvet black
it appeared so soft and smooth that I could touch it
it seemed that a hundred stars were blinking up above
but one was large and more brilliant and dazzling brighter
I am sure it was Venus shining down like a spotlight on me
and the dark moon was facing away and could not be seen
it was a magical sky and I could not take my eyes away

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July 15,  2020


Poetry/Verse/night sky musing
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1268-442-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for Strand New (10) 
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/17/2020 8:40:00 PM
I really like this. You know, it would have been really cool in John's Moment contest too!!! Congrats on your win with Brian.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/19/2020 3:52:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats, yes I will have to come up with something for John's contest that is in the moment too _Constance
Date: 7/17/2020 7:28:00 PM
Summertime is a lovely time for stargazing as the nights are warmer. My wife and I have been outside searching for the comet this week, but so far no sightings. Congrats for your #1, Constance ~ John
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Date: 7/19/2020 3:53:00 PM
John, thanks for the congrats, I have been looking to the sky also but it has been too cloudy to see anything here _Constance
Date: 7/17/2020 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. The night sky is so pretty just like your poem. I love looking up at night at the sky. It is fun watching for a full moon. Enjoy your win and day............
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Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2020 6:07:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations, it is true the sky has been very beautiful lately _Constance
Date: 7/17/2020 8:34:00 AM
Wondeful poem! Night sky musing has to be one of the truly great adventures in our lives and it's all free. Congratulations on your win, my friend!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2020 12:55:00 PM
Larry, thanks for the congratulations and the comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 7/17/2020 7:39:00 AM
I recall gazing at all the stars in the sky when I was young, nowadays you don’t see as many with all the pollution; I suppose it kind of parallels life. Congrats on your win, Constance. Hugs, John
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Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2020 12:57:00 PM
John, I know what you mean, living in the city with all the lights blocks the view of the stars, but this particular night it was beautiful, thanks for the congrats _Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/17/2020 8:31:00 AM
Yes, what a shame. The light pollution is so bad almost everywhere that we can't even see our own galaxy, the Milky Way
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