Night Sea

On this troubled, moonless night, I stand awestruck before her For somewhere beneath the foam and froth of nature's mighty daughter; Somewhere in brooding, forbidden waters lies my destiny...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:26:00 PM

wow, Tim. this is incredible. Just going through a winner list I did not get to see yet. Congrats to you!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/23/2016 10:36:00 PM

So thrilling and the imagery fantastic...I can imagine being there..Well done :)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/23/2016 10:58:00 AM

lovely poem Tim :)- congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/23/2016 9:39:00 AM

What a beauty you have written...somber, thoughtful and lovely as always !! Thanks for sharing !! (PS.....good to see you here!!)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/23/2016 7:11:00 AM

Well done, Tim! Congratulations! ...Fran

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/23/2016 6:44:00 AM

Good journey. Congratulations, Kai

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:38:00 PM

Tim, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2016 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine winTim! Cheers, Connie

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 11:21:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/18/2016 10:58:00 PM

Very wonderful write Tim.. loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win!

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2014 3:14:00 PM

Powerful poem Tim, and no deeper destiny than the sea, James......

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/13/2013 5:53:00 PM

Hi my greatest Poet Tim... I love to read your poems.. and stopping here to wish you a Very Happy Valentine :)luv and hugs !!! <3 Sk

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 10:02:00 AM

!!!

Margherita Russo

Date: 1/29/2013 2:33:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2013 11:24:00 AM

I like the depth of this winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 7:45:00 PM

Ha, Love the Texas Outlaw Name... makes me want to write a poem about the DEW'S... by the way, loving this one again & again.... always the Texas She-Tasmanian Poet.. <--- LOL

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/27/2013 5:59:00 PM

Sea - the mighty daughter of nature; very nice discription! congrats.

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/27/2013 5:50:00 AM

Well done Tim congrats...Seren

Len Gasun

Date: 1/27/2013 1:13:00 AM

Awesome Sijo! Congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Tim! love/hugs, Leonora

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/26/2013 11:09:00 PM

Hi Tim, your work is always so uplifting. I love the positive energy that flows in your poems. The thought of destiny is in equal measures alluring and daunting. You’ve managed to bring it out in a delicate and meaningful manner. A big congrats on your win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/26/2013 6:44:00 PM

Thanks for the great compliment re:Su's contest, I wanted a sonnet so I just babbled out a 14 word love message and used each word as the beginning of the lines..you try! Light & Love Cher!

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/26/2013 4:59:00 PM

Big Congratulations Tom!!! Gripping!! Well Done! Big huggs, Deb

Tim Ryerson
Date: 1/26/2013 5:55:00 PM

Tim, Tom, Tyson...don't matter!...Hey, wait a sec!...I kinda like Tyson!...from now on, I insist that you call me by that name!...Thanks so much for the kind comment Deborah and more thanks for befriending me on facebook...

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/26/2013 5:01:00 PM

Dang it!! I hate this auto correct!! Tim Tim Tim!!! Now that's what I intended to write your name Tim not Tom!! Lol. ??

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM

Tim...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2013 3:03:00 PM

Way to go Tim, congrats

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/26/2013 2:22:00 PM

Amazing! Congratulations on your Ist Place win, Tim! Annalise