Night Sea

On this troubled, moonless night, I stand awestruck before her
For somewhere beneath the foam and froth of nature's mighty daughter;
Somewhere in brooding, forbidden waters lies my destiny...

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Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2016 at 7:26 PM

wow, Tim. this is incredible. Just going through a winner list I did not get to see yet. Congrats to you!

Sunita U.D Palawon

September 23, 2016 at 10:36 PM

So thrilling and the imagery fantastic...I can imagine being there..Well done :)

Beautiful Scars

September 23, 2016 at 10:58 AM

lovely poem Tim :)- congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Carrie Richards

September 23, 2016 at 9:39 AM

What a beauty you have written...somber, thoughtful and lovely as always !! Thanks for sharing !! (PS.....good to see you here!!)

Francis J Grasso

September 23, 2016 at 7:11 AM

Well done, Tim! Congratulations! ...Fran

Kai Michael Neumann

September 23, 2016 at 6:44 AM

Good journey. Congratulations, Kai

Poet Destroyer A

January 28, 2016 at 9:38 PM

Tim, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA

Connie Marcum Wong

January 19, 2016 at 5:12 AM

Congratulations on your fine winTim! Cheers, Connie

Skat A

January 18, 2016 at 11:21 PM

Tim, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 18, 2016 at 10:58 PM

Very wonderful write Tim.. loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win!

James Fraser

July 18, 2014 at 3:14 PM

Powerful poem Tim, and no deeper destiny than the sea, James......

Sukmawati Komala

February 13, 2013 at 5:53 PM

Hi my greatest Poet Tim... I love to read your poems.. and stopping here to wish you a Very Happy Valentine :)luv and hugs !!! <3 Sk

... Gigno

February 10, 2013 at 10:02 AM

!!!

Margherita Russo

January 29, 2013 at 2:33 PM

Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks

Sara Kendrick

January 28, 2013 at 11:24 AM

I like the depth of this winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2013 at 7:45 PM

Ha, Love the Texas Outlaw Name... makes me want to write a poem about the DEW'S... by the way, loving this one again & again.... always the Texas She-Tasmanian Poet.. <--- LOL

Abdul Malik Mandani

January 27, 2013 at 5:59 PM

Sea - the mighty daughter of nature; very nice discription! congrats.

Seren Roberts

January 27, 2013 at 5:50 AM

Well done Tim congrats...Seren

Len Gasun

January 27, 2013 at 1:13 AM

Awesome Sijo! Congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Tim! love/hugs, Leonora

Vicky Tsiluma

January 26, 2013 at 11:09 PM

Hi Tim, your work is always so uplifting. I love the positive energy that flows in your poems. The thought of destiny is in equal measures alluring and daunting. You’ve managed to bring it out in a delicate and meaningful manner. A big congrats on your win!

Debbie Guzzi

January 26, 2013 at 6:44 PM

Thanks for the great compliment re:Su's contest, I wanted a sonnet so I just babbled out a 14 word love message and used each word as the beginning of the lines..you try! Light & Love Cher!

Deborah Burch

January 26, 2013 at 4:59 PM

Big Congratulations Tom!!! Gripping!! Well Done! Big huggs, Deb

Tim Ryerson

January 26, 2013 at 5:55 PM

Tim, Tom, Tyson...don't matter!...Hey, wait a sec!...I kinda like Tyson!...from now on, I insist that you call me by that name!...Thanks so much for the kind comment Deborah and more thanks for befriending me on facebook...

Deborah Burch

January 26, 2013 at 5:01 PM

Dang it!! I hate this auto correct!! Tim Tim Tim!!! Now that's what I intended to write your name Tim not Tom!! Lol. ??