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Night Ride

New Orleans thieved my heart at the start of spring, my stomach dropped along the bayou across to Mobile on train. She stopped long enough to sing in keeping with the rain. Atlanta's pink sky roaring, sore throats to spotted ring, caught a cold thru Chattanooga winding north then west thru mountain bends. To Tennessee, the accident, where money grew on trees. Stashed my pack behind a bush til night passed by in a rush. Waited for the sun to rise, high above Tallahassee plains, to warm the fire ants and cement to return south on blacktop highway.

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Date: 4/23/2014 6:54:00 AM
A good ride though In Night.
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:08:00 PM
Hey Jane, this is a great free verse poem.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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