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Night Pulse of a Forest Ground

night pulse weird creaks dim shapes move neath tall trees ferns vines pits mounds of trees that fell time has claim with moss mats lie low small bugs mice stir earth floor 2/2/2022 A Strand (1065) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/5/2022 12:51:00 AM

Strange when creatively composed as you do with one or two lines, a poem can describe a scene or can tell a story excellent poetry Evie Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2022 7:40:00 PM

This is cool that you are doing footles. I have to see if you got a win. I really like this style, eve.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/4/2022 2:01:00 AM

Not easy to do, but you made it fun and it looks effortless which I know is wrong.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/3/2022 3:35:00 PM

I so love your two step poem, short but very absorbing, every word is a flair for the next, nicely constructed dear Eve, hope all is well, hugs and prayers :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/3/2022 5:06:00 AM

A forest at night teems with life, both scary and pleasant ! Well done, Eve ....

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/3/2022 2:13:00 AM

Great string of footles Eve, nothing more magical than the forest. Tom