Night of Love's Remembrance

How my hands, in prayer, trace your face
Among a lattice of  night stars
To bestow true devotion's grace
As kisses of yesteryears charm my breath...
That I hum our familiar lullaby,
And In return, you call to ask if all's well
On this day of love, as  I clutch the same roses...
Ambrosial, crisp, the way you'd arrange them
From our garden lush as passion blue--
That thoughts gentle as moonlight 
Speak for two while my fingers note down
Love's eternal reveries , the languid memoirs 
Of twilight's passage from your shadow's goodbye:

Yet, for odd and even numbers of each hour,
I dare cherish...to walk this path with you.



Contest of Line Gauthier: A Stunner 2017
Re-entered 3/13/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/3/2018 1:29:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, nette.
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:41:00 PM
Beautifully written poetic bliss, Nette. Congratulations on your excellent win with your captivating poem..
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Date: 2/27/2018 9:48:00 AM
Beautiful write Nette, I was sure Cay Cays write was yours, it's so interesting judging blind, congrats on a fine win!!
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Date: 2/18/2018 5:54:00 AM
Make me want to celebrate this February occasion everyday. Stunningly handled!
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Date: 2/15/2018 2:38:00 PM
- Oh, so lovely .... "gentle as moonlight" ,Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:58:00 PM
A wonderful read, nette. Lovely.
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Date: 2/14/2018 3:10:00 PM
Beautiful lines Nette, perfect for the contest..
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:41:00 AM
Wow, this is just so beautiful, Nette, Happy Valentine's day xxoo
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:26:00 AM
A delightful creation..lovely flow..memories filled with love..best for a win, nette.
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