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Night of Exhausting Fun

Lighthouse in the distance, they bask in its light Darkness is lit up with each of its passing Three women in bathing suits dance in the night They put their toes in the sand, just so warming They giggle and laugh with total merriment Night’s most precious when living in the moment They went to exhaustion, had lots of real fun To home they went because the evening was done
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 1/30/2013 6:49:00 PM
Wish I had been the fourth! Great job...
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Date: 1/30/2013 6:44:00 PM
You have penned a very soothing picture in this Poem Russel.Lovely read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.
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Date: 1/30/2013 6:47:00 PM
Date: 1/30/2013 5:54:00 PM
Makes me want to visit a light house. Great poem Russell.
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Date: 1/30/2013 12:19:00 PM
Ahh!! Sounds like fun on a warm summer night..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..We have had ice a few morning in the bird baths this winter but so far it has been a very mild winter..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2013 11:44:00 AM
It's too early for me to go swimming yet ...... here it ice on the water and the sea. - Your poem makes me yearn for sun, summer and swimming. - A nice poem Russell, thank you for summer dreams. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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