Night of Dreams

Under stars so bright
Under guise of night
Night laid low
Night shall show
Show sparks of gold
Show feelings told
Told in heaven's skies
Told in gleaming eyes
Eyes so blue
Eyes held ever true
True love grows
True love we only know
Know in this my heart
Know here my feelings start
Start so ever deep
Start where we will keep
Keep our romantic rendezvous
Keep alive our "I love you"
You as one with me
You can only see
See where our futures lie
See our visions fly
Fly up to greater peaks
Fly to where our cravings seek
Seek your soul to get
Seek times to not forget
Forget me not
Forget your scent
Scent of ambrosia
Scent of seduction
Seduction fills the air
Seduction for two 
Two minds
Two lips
Lips ruby red
Lips trace    
Trace your fingers
Trace your kiss
Kiss me
Kiss me my sweet
Sweet love of mine
Sweet as the daisies sway
Sway into my arms
Sway softly away 
Away with my charm
Away in my dreams
Dreams of a fairytale story
Dreams of a life in love
Love . . .
Story . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Talwar Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 7:12 PM
Highly romantic the lovers approach is smooth. I Liked it.
Merryman Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Tim, you have a gift for writing romantic poetry and your blitz is no exception. Great work! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
White Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 10:36 PM
How could I have missed this poem??? It's incredible!
Bennett Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Lovely Tim--really enjoyed !! ~~ JEANIE ~~ xoxo
Duet Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 5:52 PM
What clever and sweet poem, Tim! I especially liked the ending.
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Wow! This is just great, Tim! Janice
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Fantastic Tim!
Hamilton Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Just great Tim, one of the best blitzes I've ever read(well I've only read three and one was mine)lol but anyway I digress, very romantic as per your usual style.a7
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 9:01 PM
Blitzes just blitz me out. Anyway, if you did it correctly, i commend you on a job well done!!
Chircop Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Isn't this beauty a blitz of bliss. Very romantic and I so love the form. A fave.
Allison Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:45 AM
WOW! You nailed it Tim a wonderful love story - I predict this will fly high in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:05 AM
- A love story filled with the most beautiful word, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Melugin Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 10:21 AM
A night well worth repeating! great work Tim! My best, chuck
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:36 AM
You blitzed me, like you were Dick Butkas!Oh wrong kind of blitz. Well anyway, it was good for me, Tim.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:31 AM
You rocked this one Tim, Bravo!
Sietesantos Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Just so beautifully romantic, Tim! Excellent Blitz! Love it! Best wishes. Pandita
Ella Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 11:39 PM
I love this style and your words evoke a wonderful love story <3
White Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Writing Blitz is on my wish list. This is brilliant. I add it to my faves.
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Quite the night, kind of a blitz. Well done Tim...
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:29 PM
Thanks Charlie...it is quite a challange
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