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Night Of Dreams

Under stars so bright Under guise of night Night laid low Night shall show Show sparks of gold Show feelings told Told in heaven's skies Told in gleaming eyes Eyes so blue Eyes held ever true True love grows True love we only know Know in this my heart Know here my feelings start Start so ever deep Start where we will keep Keep our romantic rendezvous Keep alive our "I love you" You as one with me You can only see See where our futures lie See our visions fly Fly up to greater peaks Fly to where our cravings seek Seek your soul to get Seek times to not forget Forget me not Forget your scent Scent of ambrosia Scent of seduction Seduction fills the air Seduction for two Two minds Two lips Lips ruby red Lips trace Trace your fingers Trace your kiss Kiss me Kiss me my sweet Sweet love of mine Sweet as the daisies sway Sway into my arms Sway softly away Away with my charm Away in my dreams Dreams of a fairytale story Dreams of a life in love Love . . . Story . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/11/2017 7:12:00 PM
Highly romantic the lovers approach is smooth. I Liked it.
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Date: 2/25/2017 4:12:00 PM
Tim, you have a gift for writing romantic poetry and your blitz is no exception. Great work! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/21/2017 10:36:00 PM
How could I have missed this poem??? It's incredible!
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Date: 2/15/2017 6:06:00 AM
Lovely Tim--really enjoyed !! ~~ JEANIE ~~ xoxo
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Date: 1/31/2017 5:52:00 PM
What clever and sweet poem, Tim! I especially liked the ending.
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Date: 1/30/2017 6:40:00 PM
Wow! This is just great, Tim! Janice
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Date: 1/30/2017 12:07:00 PM
Fantastic Tim!
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Date: 1/30/2017 8:46:00 AM
Just great Tim, one of the best blitzes I've ever read(well I've only read three and one was mine)lol but anyway I digress, very romantic as per your usual style.a7
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Date: 1/26/2017 9:01:00 PM
Blitzes just blitz me out. Anyway, if you did it correctly, i commend you on a job well done!!
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Date: 1/26/2017 2:30:00 PM
Isn't this beauty a blitz of bliss. Very romantic and I so love the form. A fave.
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:45:00 AM
WOW! You nailed it Tim a wonderful love story - I predict this will fly high in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:05:00 AM
- A love story filled with the most beautiful word, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2017 10:21:00 AM
A night well worth repeating! great work Tim! My best, chuck
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:36:00 AM
You blitzed me, like you were Dick Butkas!Oh wrong kind of blitz. Well anyway, it was good for me, Tim.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:31:00 AM
You rocked this one Tim, Bravo!
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:20:00 AM
Just so beautifully romantic, Tim! Excellent Blitz! Love it! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 1/25/2017 11:39:00 PM
I love this style and your words evoke a wonderful love story <3
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Date: 1/25/2017 11:13:00 PM
Writing Blitz is on my wish list. This is brilliant. I add it to my faves.
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Date: 1/25/2017 9:22:00 PM
Quite the night, kind of a blitz. Well done Tim...
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/25/2017 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Charlie...it is quite a challange