Night of Dreams

Under stars so bright
Under guise of night
Night laid low
Night shall show
Show sparks of gold
Show feelings told
Told in heaven's skies
Told in gleaming eyes
Eyes so blue
Eyes held ever true
True love grows
True love we only know
Know in this my heart
Know here my feelings start
Start so ever deep
Start where we will keep
Keep our romantic rendezvous
Keep alive our "I love you"
You as one with me
You can only see
See where our futures lie
See our visions fly
Fly up to greater peaks
Fly to where our cravings seek
Seek your soul to get
Seek times to not forget
Forget me not
Forget your scent
Scent of ambrosia
Scent of seduction
Seduction fills the air
Seduction for two 
Two minds
Two lips
Lips ruby red
Lips trace    
Trace your fingers
Trace your kiss
Kiss me
Kiss me my sweet
Sweet love of mine
Sweet as the daisies sway
Sway into my arms
Sway softly away 
Away with my charm
Away in my dreams
Dreams of a fairytale story
Dreams of a life in love
Love . . .
Story . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/11/2017 7:12:00 PM
Highly romantic the lovers approach is smooth. I Liked it.
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Date: 2/25/2017 4:12:00 PM
Tim, you have a gift for writing romantic poetry and your blitz is no exception. Great work! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/21/2017 10:36:00 PM
How could I have missed this poem??? It's incredible!
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Date: 2/15/2017 6:06:00 AM
Lovely Tim--really enjoyed !! ~~ JEANIE ~~ xoxo
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Date: 1/31/2017 5:52:00 PM
What clever and sweet poem, Tim! I especially liked the ending.
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Date: 1/30/2017 6:40:00 PM
Wow! This is just great, Tim! Janice
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Date: 1/30/2017 12:07:00 PM
Fantastic Tim!
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Date: 1/30/2017 8:46:00 AM
Just great Tim, one of the best blitzes I've ever read(well I've only read three and one was mine)lol but anyway I digress, very romantic as per your usual style.a7
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Date: 1/26/2017 9:01:00 PM
Blitzes just blitz me out. Anyway, if you did it correctly, i commend you on a job well done!!
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Date: 1/26/2017 2:30:00 PM
Isn't this beauty a blitz of bliss. Very romantic and I so love the form. A fave.
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:45:00 AM
WOW! You nailed it Tim a wonderful love story - I predict this will fly high in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:05:00 AM
- A love story filled with the most beautiful word, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2017 10:21:00 AM
A night well worth repeating! great work Tim! My best, chuck
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:36:00 AM
You blitzed me, like you were Dick Butkas!Oh wrong kind of blitz. Well anyway, it was good for me, Tim.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:31:00 AM
You rocked this one Tim, Bravo!
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:20:00 AM
Just so beautifully romantic, Tim! Excellent Blitz! Love it! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 1/25/2017 11:39:00 PM
I love this style and your words evoke a wonderful love story <3
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Date: 1/25/2017 11:13:00 PM
Writing Blitz is on my wish list. This is brilliant. I add it to my faves.
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Date: 1/25/2017 9:22:00 PM
Quite the night, kind of a blitz. Well done Tim...
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/25/2017 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Charlie...it is quite a challange
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