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Stars, Starry Sky, Galaxy

Night Moves The midnight sky is indigo as insects serenade and signal out a mating call with night vision so keen. A rhinestone tiara of stars illuminates heaven so that angels may see children innocently asleep. 1. The night was a garden of eyes.” – The Blue Bouquet 8/23/19 CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/31/2019 10:44:00 PM

Janis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 5:22:00 PM

what an awesome interpretation of the theme!! Congrats,Janis. Loved that last stanza particularly.

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/31/2019 1:30:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. Always happy to hear from you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2019 1:39:00 AM

i like how you touched on the subject of sererenity, janis.... best of congrats with thanks for joining this comp of mine.. huggs

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/31/2019 1:31:00 AM

Very lovely prompt. Looking forward to future challenges. Thanks for the placement.