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Night In Forest

Midnight, black sky Moon shines, A bright light, Shows the route back home Mighty winds, Make hedges dance Crickets scream Rivers, silent Rodents sleep Cold breezes, Flower buds, Shiver and then close Resting for tomorrow

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/23/2023 2:52:00 PM

Love the night forest ! You have brought it to life through the magic of your words Arastu ! I love flower buds close Resting for tomorrow. All the best, Susan :)

Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/24/2023 10:37:00 AM

Thanks for the encouragement, I am glad you enjoyed it :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/21/2023 1:38:00 AM

I felt like through your words you showed me the beauty of this forest and took me there where i can hear those crickets and see rivers flowing etc. such stunning imagery so seamlessly woven and flowing throughout: exquisite poem that i absolutely loved reading

Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/21/2023 1:54:00 AM

Thanks :-)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/20/2023 9:24:00 AM

A brilliant scene you've painted with your words here, as being a moon lover, this definitely strikes the perfect imagery of serenity "flower buds shiver and then close, resting for tomorrow" Definitely conveys the healing vibe! Beautifully done :)

Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/20/2023 5:56:00 PM

Thank you :-)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/20/2023 5:37:00 AM

Nothing like a night in a peaceful forest. Owoooooo

Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/20/2023 9:03:00 AM

Thank you :-)