Night Hunt

The grass rustles after nightfall— armadillos hunting. _________________________ For Brian's Adaptation Contest Inspired by the work of Buson.

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/2/2009 1:14:00 PM

Nice write Raul...I would like to collaborate with you sometime... RdP

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 7:18:00 PM

Great Haiku, Raul! Congratulations on your win! Peace and love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Raul. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2009 1:10:00 PM

Strange little creatures, like little battle tanks >> kool Haiku >> James

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/19/2009 10:02:00 AM

Congratulation for the honorable mention in the contest and making the hot poems list. Nice write A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2009 6:21:00 PM

Congrats, Raul, on your honorable mention in Brian's contest.. well earned and well deserved ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/16/2009 10:56:00 PM

As usual your talents flow from the page. Congratulations on your continued success and may you see many more. Smiles from Lolita~ thank you for your kind words on my writing; I am honored.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/12/2009 12:17:00 AM

Cogratulations On Your Win in Brian's contest--Charma

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/11/2009 9:12:00 PM

Dear Raul,Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's Contest Well Deserved Win For the Sensai of Haiku Awesome Write Always Yours...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2009 8:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Raul, on your winning poem and placement in Brian's contest.. I commented on this poem before .. knew it was a winner then .. came true now.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Elaine George

Date: 11/11/2009 6:09:00 PM

Congratulations, Raul on your masterful Haiku Win in Brian's contest. Perfect adaptation of Buson. Love, Lainie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/11/2009 1:52:00 PM

ONly you could make a poem about armadillos a work of art. Congrats on your win. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2009 12:26:00 PM

A wonderful adaptation of Buson, Raul!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie

Date: 11/11/2009 9:36:00 AM

Raul, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. to my other comment. You are a talented writer. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more successes. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 11/11/2009 8:33:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest MY DEAR is now open

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2009 5:50:00 AM

They are unique creatures Raul and I luv animals ... watch Wild Kingdom whenever I can... so into au natural scenes... great haiku.. enjoy reading your poetry... keep at it... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HG