Night Hunt

The grass rustles

after nightfall—

armadillos hunting.





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For Brian's Adaptation Contest
Inspired by the work of Buson.

animalsnaturehaiku

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Richard Pickett

December 2, 2009 at 1:14 PM

Nice write Raul...I would like to collaborate with you sometime... RdP

Audrey Haick

November 25, 2009 at 7:18 PM

Great Haiku, Raul! Congratulations on your win! Peace and love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2009 at 3:53 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Raul. Love, Carol

James Fraser

November 20, 2009 at 1:10 PM

Strange little creatures, like little battle tanks >> kool Haiku >> James

Anthony Nutter

November 19, 2009 at 10:02 AM

Congratulation for the honorable mention in the contest and making the hot poems list. Nice write A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 17, 2009 at 6:21 PM

Congrats, Raul, on your honorable mention in Brian's contest.. well earned and well deserved ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Lena Townsend

November 16, 2009 at 10:56 PM

As usual your talents flow from the page. Congratulations on your continued success and may you see many more. Smiles from Lolita~ thank you for your kind words on my writing; I am honored.

Charmaine Chircop

November 12, 2009 at 12:17 AM

Cogratulations On Your Win in Brian's contest--Charma

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

November 11, 2009 at 9:12 PM

Dear Raul,Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's Contest Well Deserved Win For the Sensai of Haiku Awesome Write Always Yours...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 11, 2009 at 8:10 PM

Congratulations, Raul, on your winning poem and placement in Brian's contest.. I commented on this poem before .. knew it was a winner then .. came true now.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Elaine George

November 11, 2009 at 6:09 PM

Congratulations, Raul on your masterful Haiku Win in Brian's contest. Perfect adaptation of Buson. Love, Lainie

Barbara Gorelick

November 11, 2009 at 1:52 PM

ONly you could make a poem about armadillos a work of art. Congrats on your win. BG

Carrie Richards

November 11, 2009 at 12:26 PM

A wonderful adaptation of Buson, Raul!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie

November 11, 2009 at 9:36 AM

Raul, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. to my other comment. You are a talented writer. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more successes. Karen

Brian Strand

November 11, 2009 at 8:33 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest MY DEAR is now open

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2009 at 5:50 AM

They are unique creatures Raul and I luv animals ... watch Wild Kingdom whenever I can... so into au natural scenes... great haiku.. enjoy reading your poetry... keep at it... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HG