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Night Hope

Night abides my hope love exists as he assures till morn steals his lie. ... CayCay Jennings December 21, 2017

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/27/2017 5:57:00 AM

These are a challenge for me CayCay. I hope this entry does well. I got your package today! Yay!...I will email you. Love, Connie. xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2017 10:02:00 AM

Nice monoku, CayCay, keep writing enjoy your poetry. Have a Merry Christmas! Hugs Eve ~`*

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/24/2017 7:27:00 AM

Sad tale, CayCay, well penned in one line:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2017 8:23:00 PM

Oh the ending is sad, Caycay. But this is not YOUR case. I am sure of it! (did you notice the number of entries in this contest is increasing? LIke we don't have enough competition already? haha)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/22/2017 7:24:00 AM

Revelation in the light of day are not always pretty.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:14:00 AM

No, people want to be loved so much at night that they dismiss the burn of daylight sun - I've seen such happen to many. Thanks for commenting. Kim - I wish you and yours the merriest of merries. Make great memories, ya hear? All the best ... CayCay

John Lawless

Date: 12/22/2017 7:03:00 AM

it is difficult to listen to the little voice that says "don't look under the covers", just get up and make the coffee.....

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:16:00 AM

Yes, just keep moving, no thinking allowed! This experience is, I suppose, part of every hearts education. It was an upper finding you on my page, John. I wish you only the best this season, and always. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

John Gondolf

Date: 12/22/2017 4:45:00 AM

CayCay, the light of day always bears the truth, somestimes I prefer to stay in the dark. Nicely written. Best of luck. John

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:12:00 AM

Yes, John, what ones does in the dark will come out in the light! This monoku isn't personal, but it does ring truth as I have witnessed in my life. If I haven't already wished you a Merry Christmas, please accept my genuine hope that joy is yours this Christmas, and the New Year, too. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/22/2017 3:11:00 AM

Love is a drug. A one liner.of coke and dissappointment in daytime reality. What a ride though. Superb monoku

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, dear heart. They say no line is ever as good as the first one, people chase that first one. I have no idea how or why that is relevant to my thanks, but my mind went there. Thank you for the word, 'superb' - it is the word I use to describe your personality. Now, go forth and spiritually prosper! Love ... CayCay

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/21/2017 8:53:00 PM

I love this CayCay. So much said in seventeen syllables. The light of day can and often does reveal to us that which we don't want to see... A deep and eloquent one liner. Best wishes for a win lovely lady. Hugs and smiles.. ~Susan

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:21:00 AM

Hey, my friend - I've been thinking about you. Hope all is in divine flow at your house, in your mind and body. My wish is to read people this morning, but Xmas to-dos are calling me. So far, so wonderful at our house. So glad you enjoyed the monoku. If we don't 'talk' again, know my thoughts and wishes for joy are aimed at you. Love ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/21/2017 4:06:00 PM

Romantic monoku!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:23:00 AM

Romantic Arthur! Hey, you, thanks for reading. AND please tend to joy and it you this Christmas. All the best to you, Arthur. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 12/21/2017 3:05:00 PM

a wonderful one liner Caycay good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:25:00 AM

If time permits, I want to check your page cause I bet you came up with a great one liner. I count on you for greatness which might put pressure on you! Jan, be blessed - I insist upon it, just as I insist on perfect health for you. I will continue sending out positive thoughts / prayers. You are loved ... CayCay

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/21/2017 1:59:00 PM

Woah! You wrote a whole story in just one line, fantastic. My best to you in the contest! xomo :)

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/22/2017 9:26:00 AM

Thank you for such an enthusiastic response to the monoku, it was a joy to find it on my page. Have a Merry Merry, a memory making Christmas. Poetry hugs ... CayCay