Night Fishing Along New River

fog is settling in creepy river hums a chant ~ shadows disappear Written October 22, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2022 4:21:00 AM

I want to go night fishing right now!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2022 8:32:00 AM

Well, I know the place, Caren. C'mon. I'll go with you!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/22/2022 4:45:00 PM

Love this Milton. I can feel some trepidation in being there at night. Your words set the mood. Great imagery in such a few words but it brings back erie memories of being alone in the dark surrounded by things in the night. Thanks for sharing...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 6:47:00 PM

Thanks for the read, Michael. I seemed to have river fog on the brain. Of course, I often find that my brain is foggy!