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Night Fears

Waking at night, suddenly, Silence and darkness, Save the whisper of the wind And a faint glow of orange light. The familiar clutch of fear, Always there. But fear of what? The unknown? Or the known certainty that the end will come, Gradually or suddenly, Peacefully or brutally, Inevitably. Our lives are but a tiny indentation, Then the water closes over. No sign, no mark, no trace, Of a life half-lived, Of family and friends half loved. Of chances not taken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/29/2019 3:29:00 PM
Interesting verse Allison, funny though how you wake at a strange hour and there's that forboding feeling, worse if you have a disturbing dream, is it something we've inherited from early man when there was so.much danger about.. Tom.
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Date: 1/14/2019 3:38:00 PM
Love this line: "Our lives are but a tiny indentation, Then the water closes over." Beautifully penned.
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Alison Douglas
Date: 1/29/2019 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. I am sorry it has taken me so long to reply but I fell and sprained my wrist before Christmas and using a keypad has been tricky. Thank you again for your encouraging comments. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/13/2018 7:46:00 PM
Fear of what? Of chances not taken. Absolutely a hundred percent right. People when polled after living a lifetime, say the only regrets they have are not taking the chances they wanted to take. They regretted nothing else. A beautiful poem, a look into our souls. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Alison. Keep posting!
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Alison Douglas
Date: 11/18/2018 8:55:00 AM
Dear Caren, thank you so much for posting such a lovely comment about my poem. I really appreciate the encouragement. To be honest I only have about four or five finished poems but I feel inspired to take another look at them. Thank you again

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