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Night Fantasies

Complicit in our nightly rendezvouses
The moon and stars, my heart's accomplices
Clandestine lovers take celestial cues
As we fulfill the soft night's promises

Conspiring with my heart, the when and where
We meet in places only they can know
Reflecting from blue eyes and golden hair
They greet my heart and lend their heav'nly glow

And then in silence watching from above
Seducing with romantic ambience
They blink and blush as you and I make love
Two star crossed fools locked in our heart's response

The moon and stars bring nightly fantasies
For passing ships that sail on starry seas


    December 13  2016
    by Daniel Turner
 Rendez/vous (voo),  vouses (vuz)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Awwwwwwww, I loved the melody your night time fantasies brought to me ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Then to you I give a perhaps, ew la la. Okay now I'm flirting. I go in shame ...
Turner Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Discretion keeps me from saying, perhaps you have been in one or two, CayCay. Thank you my sweet friend:)
Hauser  Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Very romantic! Good luck! With the poem that is! Lol!
Turner Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Mike:)
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 8:58 PM
Blue eyes and golden hair have got you penning words with gracious care...Romantic, dear. Good luck in the contest
Turner Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Thank you, Eileen:) You are so sweet.
Daniel Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Lovely write on that beautiful picture, Daniel:)
Turner Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Thank you, Jo:)
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 8:55 PM
You came up with a gem for the contest, Daniel, a romantic one. I too would have chosen that picture.
Turner Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Thank you, Andrea:)
Curtis Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 8:58 AM
You Dan are a Master of words--you paint a pretty picture
Turner Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry. It's paint by number for me:)
Bhattacharya Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 4:26 AM
The extravagantly rich imagery of the night can only be created by such a romantic poet as you.
Turner Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Thank you, Sarban. What a wonderfully flattering comment:)
Gupta Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Night's promises perfectly fulfilled ... beautiful ...
Turner Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Thank you, Probir:)
P  Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Rousingly intense sonnet Danny, a sigh and a quiver. :) Heavenly...
P  Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Much better after reading your fantasy. :)
Turner Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thank you, my dear Paloma:) Hoping you are well:)
Murray Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 4:44 AM
How romantic. Beautiful Dreamer.
Turner Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 8:49 AM
That's me always dreaming:) Thank you, Jean.
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Another great sonnet, Daniel--moving and romantic! Janice
Turner Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, Janice:)
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Wow, Daniel, this is fabulous and very romantic . Good luck in the contest.. and thank you so very much for your visit I promise not to throw snow at you Hugs Eve
Turner Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Mrs Eve. Aw, I don't mind, I've been hit with worse:)
Kannan Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:29 AM
Beautiful sonnet... You are a sonnet expert... A big 7...
Turner Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Supraja:)
Parker Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 6:20 PM
A strong entry Daniel..good luck
Turner Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thank you , Frederic:)
Green Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Oh my Daniel, this was euphoric and romantically beautiful. Your poem will enchant many of the lady poets who read it. This was amazing.
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Chris. Just trying to keep up with you and Tim:)
Smith Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Sonnet man....Great work DT.
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you, Charlie. No, just the same old DT:)
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Yes, very romantic. Nice Daniel! Good luck in the contest :)
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thank you, Heidi:)
Smith Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Very romantic DT
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thank you, Tim. I've been paying attention:)
Rycroft Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Great romantic moonlight poem x
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, Mrs Wendy:)
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