Night Dreamer-Rhymed Senryu

Furry cat, so soft. Purring, and more on than off. Across me, aloft. 1/21/2021 ~2~

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Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/21/2021 11:35:00 AM

The most elegant critter God did design; Is the inscrutable but companionable feline! Great tribute to your pal Irene, Pangie - Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/21/2021 7:16:00 PM

Super- duper couplet....that, they are Bob! Irene waves a thank you. Passing out shortly. Talk tomorrow! Pangie

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/21/2021 9:21:00 AM

You must love your cat very much. ~~

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/21/2021 7:20:00 PM

Dont know how I would survive close to a year lockdown without her. Victor...I always have has cats. Twenty, so far! Thank you for two visits today~ very sweet. Pangie

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/21/2021 7:24:00 AM

I can certainly see that dreamy cat...

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/21/2021 7:13:00 PM

Arturo...I must Post her photo one day. I mention her in so many poems... You should be with her! . She is really magical Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/21/2021 7:37:00 AM

She should be posted online, so my friends here can see her. Wonderful to see you.. Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/21/2021 6:54:00 AM

I can just picture the scene Pangie, Irene sounds like shes very content. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/21/2021 7:35:00 AM

So glad you can see it....lately, I have become her bed.)) And she knows when I am upset, cuddling my face with her paws. Wonderful...thank you Tom. Pangie