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Night Descends

the sun has just set in pale black gown, the day glides~ tranquil lies nature Placed second March.3. 2022 H forms Traditional Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor – Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2022 4:29:00 PM

Well done, Valsa. BIG congrats for the win

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2022 8:26:00 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2022 4:44:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Very creative and expressive lines. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/6/2022 1:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this stunningly crafted Haiku, dear Valsa.

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/5/2022 3:34:00 PM

I'm just dropping by to say congratulations. Valsa..Blessings ~ Debra

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/3/2022 11:05:00 AM

Every line a treasure Valsa

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/3/2022 4:52:00 AM

Great imagery in every line. Well done, Valsa.

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/3/2022 2:41:00 AM

Vasal, You painted a lovely picture, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/2/2022 11:40:00 PM

Oh yeah, brilliant image, Valsa:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/2/2022 10:44:00 PM

Hi Valsa, This is just lovely. I enjoyed the view. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis

Anselmo Boles

Date: 3/2/2022 10:19:00 PM

A picturesque description of the final breath of day. Tranquil, Valsa!...ab