Valsa George Poet Haiku

Night Descends

 the sun has just set
in pale black gown, the day glides~
tranquil lies nature


Placed second
March.3. 2022
H forms Traditional Nature Haiku
Poetry Contest
Sponsor – Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2022 at 4:29 PM Well done, Valsa. BIG congrats for the win

Constance La France March 8, 2022 at 8:26 AM Valsa, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2022 at 4:44 AM Congrats on your winning work. Very creative and expressive lines. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Sotto Poet March 6, 2022 at 1:46 AM Congratulations on your win with this stunningly crafted Haiku, dear Valsa.

Debra L Brown March 5, 2022 at 3:34 PM I'm just dropping by to say congratulations. Valsa..Blessings ~ Debra

Caren Krutsinger March 3, 2022 at 11:05 AM Every line a treasure Valsa

Vijay Pandit March 3, 2022 at 4:52 AM Great imagery in every line. Well done, Valsa.

Debra L Brown March 3, 2022 at 2:41 AM Vasal, You painted a lovely picture, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra

Joanna Daniel March 2, 2022 at 11:40 PM Oh yeah, brilliant image, Valsa:)

Alexis Y. March 2, 2022 at 10:44 PM Hi Valsa, This is just lovely. I enjoyed the view. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis

Anselmo Boles March 2, 2022 at 10:19 PM A picturesque description of the final breath of day. Tranquil, Valsa!...ab