Night At The Carnival

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'What the world loves is' Poetry Contest Sponsor- Nette Onclaud 6/25/2025

With the sky darkened and clear Atop the Ferris wheel Looking at the stars and seeing the moon... Smiling!

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Gary Radice

Date: 6/26/2025 3:19:00 AM

Love this Charlie. A moment in time captured beautifully. The stars and moon makes the wheel's height insignificant in comparison but I loved that moment of contemplation. Perhaps both you and the moon were smiling? For the last 25 years Ive run a website about the history of parks and rides. Did you know The Ferris wheel made its debut in 1893 at Chicago. I used to love the ride at Blackpool UK and swinging the seat when it was at the top. My wife has never forgiven me. :) Cheers - Gary

Ink Empress

Date: 6/26/2025 2:47:00 AM

How beautiful, i could see through your descriptive word weaving dear charles, so good to see you after a long time: i find ferris wheels nice to look at and been on them couple of times altho i fear heights. Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always

Maria Williams

Date: 6/25/2025 6:53:00 AM

Dear Charlie, such a lovely, peaceful moment — like a quiet smile from the universe. Good luck in the contest..Hugs

Charles Messina
Date: 6/25/2025 7:10:00 AM

Hello Maria, so nice to hear from you...Thank you so much... Hugs dear friend :)