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Night The stairs are dark And harsh on me but I just huddle there Its time for bed Rings in my head and I am full of fear You walk by me and Without a glance Indifferent to my Needs So i curl up there On those steps head Resting on my knees I’m afraid mama its Dark up there please Don’t make me go Theres a monster That visits me at Night though i Shouldn’t tell you So Ill go on up and in My bed i will tuck Myself in tight But i won’t sleep Cuz theres a monster That creeps into my Room at night Where are my Parents, why don’t You come up to check That i’m asleep If you ever did you Would see that i hid Under blankets where I weep Awakened in the dark Of night a hand over My mouth I must be silent and Pray to god to show Me a way out My eyes shut tight With all my might i Try to disappear The smell of sweat And heavy breathe is All that i can hear And when it’s done He sneaks away into The closet where he Lives And i just somehow Melt away into the Blackness that’s Within.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/5/2014 5:12:00 PM
If you have a chance read my poem "the Ripping" I think you will relate.
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/5/2014 5:30:00 PM
Richard-I remember it well-inspiring powerful story of triumph. It reminds me why I no longer let anyone tell me who I am and apparently, neither do you. :-) Christine
Date: 9/5/2014 4:40:00 PM
Abuse of a child is such a horrible thing, I applaude your strenth of spirit to write such a raw piece. If this is a personal experience I pray that you had someone to help you escape.
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/5/2014 5:08:00 PM
Richard, thank you for your encouraging words. It was important to me to write is just as cold as I remembered it-without any sense of holding back a secret. Also, I have recovered-thank you much. :-) Christine
Date: 9/3/2014 11:26:00 AM
OH!! Oh my dear. How could I have not read this piece. It is so.....full of pain and despair. It's SO SO well written! Christine! If this isn't a fictional write, I hope that the monster nightmares never disturb your sleep, dear one.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/3/2014 1:06:00 PM
Well...I was riveted to my spot reading it. That should tell you something. My dear....your pain will make you stronger...and it will help others to know they are not alone in the nightmares they face. My heart goes out to you.
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/3/2014 12:11:00 PM
Eileen, thank you for reading and for your comments. I only started writing poetry 3 months ago so I have a lot of old baggage to unleash. I assure you I have fared well through it all but can easily get in touch with the pain i felt in the past. I'm so glad you think it's well written, I am flying by the seat of my pants here. Hugs!!!!!:-) Christine
Date: 8/14/2014 10:33:00 PM
Christine, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 8/1/2014 2:59:00 PM
Christine, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/1/2014 1:36:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Christine :) - I choose your first very well written verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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