Night

Night, Fill me Your beauty Of darkness when Everything's sober. Ignite these two hearts now, And turn to fiery amber. Give me your sweet flower fragrance, And witness this passionate romance As we dance together in midnight tune.

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Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/6/2008 2:52:00 AM

Lovely poem Teresita, full of romance and passionate images! Great to read. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 11/5/2008 10:12:00 AM

Congrats on your poem being featured - it is lovely -

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/3/2008 1:08:00 PM

So glad to see your beautiful poem featured this week. Well deserved congratulations Teresita. Love, Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/3/2008 8:52:00 AM

So nice to read such a lovely poem this morning, and even better to see it as a featured poem this week! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/3/2008 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations Teresita on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/3/2008 5:32:00 AM

Teresita - As I stated before wonderfully passionate and romantic - congrats on being featured - God Bless

Elaine George

Date: 11/2/2008 6:07:00 PM

Beautiful perfect Etheree. lainie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/2/2008 5:11:00 PM

Congrats Teresita on your Etheree "Night" being featured this week. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/19/2008 7:21:00 AM

Very beautiful and well written poem - the passion of romance is displayed very well in this poem - God Bless