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Whisper to me winsome wind of night... Romance me with your guile of pale moonlight. Let me hear the ocean's melody Singing softly to set my spirit free. Night blooming Jasmine scent the humid air... Serenely, I'll enjoy night without a care. Oh night with stars aglow, this feeling you instill, Such ambience to free my heart, my will... To uncloak the stringent shadows of the day... I surrender; let any sad emotions steal away. Connie Marcum Wong © 6-12-16 Night Silence Poetry Contest Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron N/A

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Tom Arnone

Date: 8/8/2016 11:23:00 PM

I would recite that to any sleep-ready child (or adult). Nice bedtime rhyme. :-)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/7/2016 1:13:00 PM

Truly beautiful writing, Connie; love the imagery. Love the art is well! Is this a painting of yours? They go perfectly together. Thank you for sharing.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/7/2016 6:05:00 PM

No, I wish. God Bless Google. I can usually find just the picture I want from them. I write my poem first then search for an image to fit it and I usually get lucky. Thank you Joe. ; )

Paul Schneiter

Date: 7/25/2016 11:03:00 PM

Dear Connie, Absolutely wonderful. . .in imagery, in flow, in rhyme, in message--all with a sweet touch of nostalgia. I love it! hugs x x x

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/28/2016 3:22:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul.Your supportive words are much appreciated my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 6/25/2016 4:17:00 PM

This poem sings like a melody,,......Beautiful

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/17/2016 1:12:00 AM

This is so beautiful:) Sounds like a lovely Lyric:)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/17/2016 1:31:00 AM

Thank you Jo. It didn't make the winner's list but at least I felt inspired to write it. ; )

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/15/2016 11:19:00 PM

Excellent. Beautiful imagery write. All the best for the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2016 5:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Ravi. It got an N/A but I am still happy the contest inspired me to write it. ; )

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2016 9:30:00 PM

This is so musical,Connie, and wonderful! A 7 Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/15/2016 6:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Eve. ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2016 3:03:00 PM

seeing it again, Connie. Sorry it was not included on the winner list. I think you did a lovely job on it.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/14/2016 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, at least I was inspired to write one. ; )

Tim Smith

Date: 6/13/2016 7:44:00 PM

Love the serenity this piece brings Connie.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/14/2016 1:55:00 AM

Thank you very much Tim. ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2016 6:19:00 PM

this is a beauty, Connie. Good luck in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/14/2016 1:54:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea. ; )

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2016 10:38:00 AM

Like your previous poem 'waves', this one also relates to the ocean song. You present such a lovely picture...wind, sea, stars, moon; ideal to transmit overpowering emotions. I like "To uncloak the stringent shadows of the day..." gl in the contest, Connie...and have a lovely week! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/13/2016 3:09:00 PM

Thank you very much Paul. I went through a dry spell, but I think my muse is back. Nights here are only about ten degrees cooler and they are lovely so we can swim at night if so inclined. Cheers, Connie ; )

Ur Mom

Date: 6/13/2016 9:34:00 AM

beautiful, connie! read it to the kids :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/13/2016 3:31:00 PM

I read it to my four year old granddaughter and she liked it. She loved my poem Waves. Lol. Thanks ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/13/2016 9:30:00 AM

So very soothing, Connie, and with such tranquil imagery. I think your poem will do very well in the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/13/2016 3:25:00 PM

I hope so. Thanks very much Sandra. Cheers, Connie ; )

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/13/2016 4:29:00 AM

Wow! What a pretty and enjoyable write. I inhale the scent of your nature piece and it lures me to sleep, though it is not night.........A.M.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/13/2016 4:41:00 AM

You must be in India Afolabi. (smile). It is late here, 11:40 pm and I am going to bed now. Thank you for such a nice comment to dream on my friend. Hugs, Connie ; )