Nicholaus

A jolly old elf named Nicolaus
had all the elves in a frightful fuss
	he played with the toys
	for good girls and boys
and left the workshop in a big muss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 6:51 AM
A creative Limerick write. I enjoyed it. Have a Very Blessed Christmas & New Year 2023.......................
Fowler Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Thank you my dear Paula. Have a wonderful week and Merry Christmas!! blessings and hugs, Linda :)
Brotherton Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 5:35 PM
Delightful limerick for the holidays, my friend. He is invoking the father rule. Playing with the toys is the reward for assembling them.
Fowler Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Hi Jerry. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I had forgotten about the father rule. LOL. My father did love to play with us (and our toys). Thanks for your visit and comments. :)
Sangster - K Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 2:41 PM
A delightful limerick Linda. I enjoyed reading this tonight.Thanks for the chuckles :-D
Fowler Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 5:49 PM
Hi Anne! Thank you for reading this tonight and chuckling. :) ps: you're welcome ;)
Lane Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Well... he could say he was just testing them. lol Love your sense of humor, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:29 PM
I believe you are correct Lin. He's just testing the toys, or perhaps the elves, eh?! ;) Love yours as well. Thanks for visiting today. :)
M  Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Happy, cute and fun LO!! Debx
Fowler Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Hi Deb. I don't always write ribald or bawdy limericks. LOL Thanks for commenting LO :)
Bell Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Elf and Safety will be after him now.
Fowler Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:25 PM
LOL Elf and Safety. Don't want any violations, do we? Thank you for stopping by Paul. :)
Poet Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Endearingly adorable, and brimming with fun! Very enjoyable to read Linda
Fowler Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Many thanks my friend Las. :)
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