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Niceties Have Become More Rare

Looking for a real sensitive soul Are there any left out there In this crazy fast paced age of computers Niceties have become more rare Except of course here on the Soup We all still care about love About thoughtfulness and tender wishes Sweet love words all else above We could teach this world how to love Us guys sure know the ropes All it takes are these three words plus two “Please allow me to grope” Ooops I guess I kinda destroyed the mood Got carried away for sure But I'm certain you got the general idea My naughtiness please ignore © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/4/2014 2:05:00 PM
Naughtiness with all its niceties...why not!
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/4/2014 3:22:00 PM
Will pass the message on :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 2:18:00 PM
Where would we be without the naughties... life is serious enough! Need to lighten things up to balance! Thanks Paul, for dropping by! Say hello to your sweet neighbour Charmaine!!!
Date: 3/4/2014 8:35:00 AM
Don't worry we're used to naughty here. Tho Dragon's naughty in a different way, of course! Dragon became jealous when his penguins laid some eggs. He wanted to babysit them... in hopes of returning them to different parents. The penguins aren't fools and wouldn't let him close. So I told him the eggs are like favorite blanky's that they'll never put down, and that, he'd have more penguins when they hatch. So now, he's blinging out little blanky's with names he's picked, for each and every one.
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Carol Eastman
Date: 3/4/2014 5:51:00 PM
Gee... Jack... You ask that to someone who talks about make believe Dragons and such... LOL... Actually... we're all just Ducky!... Ummm... Maybe we need a little ducky pet for Dragon's penguins! Cool!... Remember... I might be strange, but you read my comments... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 9:38:00 AM
How is your brood holding up with this nasty winter weather! XOXOX
Date: 3/4/2014 6:51:00 AM
How can we ignore the naughtiness? It is so very present within this poem...you naughty man! Ha ha, you are quite funny my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this morning! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/4/2014 6:54:00 AM
Damn naughtiness keeps creeping in... need to see a shrink, I think! LOL

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