Niagara

Spray from the waterfall cascading Rainbows bright light up the foam Glistening drops sparkle in the sunlight The thunder of the rolling waters deafen As we stand enthralled, gasping with wonder

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/15/2025 2:53:00 AM

'gasping' it is. beautiful imagery. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Denis Bruce
Date: 3/15/2025 8:21:00 AM

Thank you for letting me know.It is so kind of you

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 3/12/2025 11:02:00 AM

Your poem brings back memories of when I was a child walking on some flimsy bridge at Niagra Falls. The awe I felt you captured perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

Denis Bruce
Date: 3/12/2025 1:12:00 PM

I was fortunate enough to live in St Catharine's for two years and experienced the beauty and power of those magnificent falls.I am so glad that my humble attempt relit your memories of your experience there