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Next To You, Laying All Alone

It seems as though there is a great distance between us, even when we are next to each other in our bed. I lay next to you, and I feel this frigid wall all around you, and no matter how hard I try to understand what the problem is, I never find a answer. I want so much to make you happy, but I feel like I am always losing my way. Because no matter what I try, it never seems to be enough to make you smile. I wish that when I lay down next to you, you would hold me, and love me like you used to. I don't want to be all alone while laying next to you.

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Date: 6/3/2017 8:53:00 PM
Good one.poet is talking of enuii in a relationship when the partner becomes unresponsive n just overlooks the other. Nice narration of feelings
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