Next Door

Next door was a paddock 
of long grass and a graveyard 
for dumped machinery.
Rusted out boilers, cogs, wheels
and huge presses were piled high
and begged for the sure foot
of a boy to climb and boast
the height. 

Strange, twisted shapes 
held a pose that seemed to freeze
the agony of being broken apart.
Sinews of wire cable hung
from joints in frayed strands
as if torn out of sockets.
Grease oozed from cracks
like congealed blood.

Nothing seemed to fit 
a species familiar to a boy,
each part a mystery as to what
beast it belonged.
There were holes big enough
too fit a head, throated cavities 
that harbored unknown echoes
and pipes that would hold
a haunting note when struck
with a stick.

One afternoon on coming home
from school, there was nothing 
left but a cleared block.
Everything had been carted away.
A workman told my Mum
that snakes had crawled out
of the place where I used to play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 6:41 AM
This reminds me of an early poem I wrote entitled, "The Tombstone" I enjoyed this because of the reference to little boys and their imaginations. Another fine poem, Paul.
Willason Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 7:23 PM
The landscapes of childhood remain with us...become personal totems of our history. How a child's imagination furnishes the ordinary with such intensity. Thanks Daniel
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