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New Year's Resolution Devolution

Sue’s given up picking her nose And wiping the slime on her clothes But what she does more Is what I abhor… She’s eating the fluff from her toes! 15th January 2018

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/16/2018 1:19:00 PM

I wish we can meet.... I love the funny side of you a lot....

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2018 2:19:00 PM

aww Pashang there are so many lovely soupers I would love to meet - my humour flows in my poems but I am far more reserved in 'real' life. :-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/15/2018 7:06:00 PM

Yikes!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2018 1:32:00 AM

lol its pretty gross!:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 1/15/2018 10:58:00 AM

EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! This is hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 11:02:00 AM

lol Dale hilarious in a gross way - just trying to keep my spirits up and raise a smile if I can:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 1/15/2018 10:37:00 AM

Lol...oh Jan To get center to work properly you need to start on line 6 :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 10:50:00 AM

Grrrr thanks Tim I discovered by trial and error - why can't that icon be above the poem!!!! hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/15/2018 10:30:00 AM

Haha ,good one Jan ,but I think I'd rather eat the fluff. Hope all's well with the test results. Regards Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 10:32:00 AM

Eww no no no Tom lol :-) I am trying to write fun stuff and keep postive:-) Thanks for your support:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/15/2018 8:42:00 AM

Gross but funny Jan. You are so good at these. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/15/2018 8:44:00 AM

Thanks Rick I agree its gross and removed the original pic i posted lol. I just need humour at the moment am waiting my test results and just need to have fun:-) hugs jan xx