New Years Old Wishes

New years old wishes are
the dandelion fluffs of my life’s springtime.
I blew wistfully on a pappus; its many feathered seeds
wafted – weightless as whispers – in the wind.

To where they flew, I do not know.
Very few of them found their way 
into any of my own new years yet to come.
Did they scatter out into a Dreamland,
to manifest themselves in the lives of others
of whom I sometimes felt a bit envious?

I imagine the tiny dandelion parachutes
of others’ longings as having lifted and then
drifted unexpectedly into some of my better new years.
They had not been my specific wishes; nevertheless,
they were gracious seedlings of yearnings 
that planted themselves and grew to bless my life.

I stopped blowing on candles or dandelion fluff
many many years ago. Hardly any wants -new or old -
do I wish for any more.  Life is what it is.
In any new year, I will take what floats my way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kerr Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 12:49 AM
Andrea, Thank you for your comment on Survival. Much appreciated. Your above work is so intelligent and uplifting. A wistful philosophic slant based on deep reflections. Howard
Narain Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Nice poem. A great winner.
Beaufort Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 8:18 AM
Andrea, this has a very interesting message. The idea that you have transitioned from wishing for things to accepting what life has to offer is a fascinating topic. Some people I've known seemed so goal directed and innate to them. I was never that way, so this poem rings true to me. I tried to incorporate my own talents into what opportunities presented themselves. Not always easy for people like us, but sometimes we strike gold!
Cornish Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 9:56 AM
AD...HMMM - thought you couldn't escape the metered maze - yet - here you are! Love what you've done with these "almost" childhood memories, we never escape because, yes, they are truly part of our souls - our "today"...your words have brought us all to that realization! Excellent poetry!
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 11:27 AM
Sometimes I can do it if I put my mind to it. But it's not just about meter. It also involves imagery and being super unique. Not an easy thing! Glad you liked my effort.
Adams Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 9:27 AM
i used to love to blow dandelion wishes in the wind, your poem made my mind wonder back in time and ponder some thoughts. i wonder if i wished on one and it floated to someone else who wished on it, whose wish would be granted? the first wish, the last wish or perhaps all wishes wished on it would be granted? great take on the theme, congrats on your win!
Foster Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Wishes and prayers, and wants and needs. We all have them but in the end we live with what comes our way. Well written Andrea congratulations on your win hugs.
Jones Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 6:25 PM
A no nonsense approach to the new year! I enjoyed reading! Congratulations
Hind Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 4:47 PM
Very encouraging - your perspective " near years old wishes" is a good motto
Bayles Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 6:12 PM
A good poem of passage.
Maverick Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 2:02 AM
Succinct and insightfull..Dear' still heres wishing you A prosperous new delightfull year.!!
Tor Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Love this realistic write Andrea as we get older we know that we control our own fate for the most part unless we ask our Lord to intervene. Hugs...
Buhagiar Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 10:38 AM
In actual time, we just have to bear what fate hands us. Yet we pray for a blessed and happy New Year. Hugs.
Hawley Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:28 PM
Your last line, there in is some wisdom. As for me I wish for things typically when I have problems that need to be solved or at the very least addressed.
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 10:24 AM
I do the same, Miranda but my one big wish and prayer goes unanswered after 8 years now. I am resigned to being stuck in my physical rut until I die
Singh Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:10 PM
Where the winds carry them.Life,hope and hopes.Abbout 50 years ago I wrote a poem in the college magazine about tera paibi(fluffs) and still sometimes remembering it.Yours is a very beautiful and meaningful poem.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:11 PM
So cool!! And thanks, Akham.
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Funny, a few days ago I saw many of those dandelion fluffs blowing across my backyard. I wondered if my neighbor's grandchildren were out in their backyard blowing a bunch of them as there were so many blowing across my backyard. I hadn't thought about making wishes on dandelion fluffs in a long, long time. I did pray the Lord would attach blessings instead of wishes to each of them and carry the blessings across the neighborhood. It's funny to see your poem and remember that recent experience.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:12 PM
Love what this reminded you of! Thanks, BJ
George Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:07 PM
" Life is what it is. In any new year, I will take what floats my way." Yes, Andrea, this is the best and healthiest attitude. Accept all that comes our way as we do not have control over many things. Beautifully written. Wish you a Happy New Year.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:13 PM
The older I get, the more I realize I have to be satisfied with any good thrown my way. Thanks, Valsa
Loving Iii Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:49 PM
long time since I blew one. but metaphorically speaking it is the poetry we write looking for a place to land. taking root in someones mind or finding a copy machine.
Theraven Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:38 PM
Andrea, Lovely write in fluffy New Year's dream, even if somewhat filled with ennui. Some may see a parting growth in pesky year's weeds, but not me. Love pretty dandelions, past, present, and future. Best New Year's wishes. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:14 PM
Thanks. I love dandelions
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:08 PM
Maybe this will be year of good returns on all your charitable work done. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:14 PM
Thanks, Sara. I am not all that charitable though!!
Buehler Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:37 PM
A wonderfully engrossing tale of what may have become of old, youthful wishes. The poem also deals with learning to let go of wishing, and to take life as it comes. Since we are poised at the verge of a new year, this poem is so meaningful. :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 10:15 PM
Thanks. You really got my mesning
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