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New Years Old Wishes

New years old wishes are the dandelion fluffs of my life’s springtime. I blew wistfully on a pappus; its many feathered seeds wafted – weightless as whispers – in the wind. To where they flew, I do not know. Very few of them found their way into any of my own new years yet to come. Did they scatter out into a Dreamland, to manifest themselves in the lives of others of whom I sometimes felt a bit envious? I imagine the tiny dandelion parachutes of others’ longings as having lifted and then drifted unexpectedly into some of my better new years. They had not been my specific wishes; nevertheless, they were gracious seedlings of yearnings that planted themselves and grew to bless my life. I stopped blowing on candles or dandelion fluff many many years ago. Hardly any wants -new or old - do I wish for any more. Life is what it is. In any new year, I will take what floats my way.

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Date: 1/15/2025 10:37:00 AM
Nice poem. A great winner.
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Date: 1/13/2025 8:18:00 AM
Andrea, this has a very interesting message. The idea that you have transitioned from wishing for things to accepting what life has to offer is a fascinating topic. Some people I've known seemed so goal directed and innate to them. I was never that way, so this poem rings true to me. I tried to incorporate my own talents into what opportunities presented themselves. Not always easy for people like us, but sometimes we strike gold!
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Date: 1/8/2025 9:56:00 AM
AD...HMMM - thought you couldn't escape the metered maze - yet - here you are! Love what you've done with these "almost" childhood memories, we never escape because, yes, they are truly part of our souls - our "today"...your words have brought us all to that realization! Excellent poetry!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/8/2025 11:27:00 AM
Sometimes I can do it if I put my mind to it. But it's not just about meter. It also involves imagery and being super unique. Not an easy thing! Glad you liked my effort.
Date: 1/8/2025 9:27:00 AM
i used to love to blow dandelion wishes in the wind, your poem made my mind wonder back in time and ponder some thoughts. i wonder if i wished on one and it floated to someone else who wished on it, whose wish would be granted? the first wish, the last wish or perhaps all wishes wished on it would be granted? great take on the theme, congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2025 7:43:00 PM
Wishes and prayers, and wants and needs. We all have them but in the end we live with what comes our way. Well written Andrea congratulations on your win hugs.
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Date: 1/7/2025 6:25:00 PM
A no nonsense approach to the new year! I enjoyed reading! Congratulations
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Date: 1/3/2025 4:47:00 PM
Very encouraging - your perspective " near years old wishes" is a good motto
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Date: 1/1/2025 6:12:00 PM
A good poem of passage.
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Date: 1/1/2025 2:02:00 AM
Succinct and insightfull..Dear' still heres wishing you A prosperous new delightfull year.!!
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Date: 12/31/2024 4:40:00 PM
Happiness found in life's unexpected gifts. Thanks for this Andrea
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Date: 12/31/2024 1:59:00 PM
Love this realistic write Andrea as we get older we know that we control our own fate for the most part unless we ask our Lord to intervene. Hugs...
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Date: 12/31/2024 10:38:00 AM
In actual time, we just have to bear what fate hands us. Yet we pray for a blessed and happy New Year. Hugs.
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Date: 12/30/2024 10:28:00 PM
Your last line, there in is some wisdom. As for me I wish for things typically when I have problems that need to be solved or at the very least addressed.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/31/2024 10:24:00 AM
I do the same, Miranda but my one big wish and prayer goes unanswered after 8 years now. I am resigned to being stuck in my physical rut until I die
Date: 12/30/2024 10:10:00 PM
Where the winds carry them.Life,hope and hopes.Abbout 50 years ago I wrote a poem in the college magazine about tera paibi(fluffs) and still sometimes remembering it.Yours is a very beautiful and meaningful poem.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:11:00 PM
So cool!! And thanks, Akham.
Date: 12/30/2024 9:27:00 PM
Funny, a few days ago I saw many of those dandelion fluffs blowing across my backyard. I wondered if my neighbor's grandchildren were out in their backyard blowing a bunch of them as there were so many blowing across my backyard. I hadn't thought about making wishes on dandelion fluffs in a long, long time. I did pray the Lord would attach blessings instead of wishes to each of them and carry the blessings across the neighborhood. It's funny to see your poem and remember that recent experience.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:12:00 PM
Love what this reminded you of! Thanks, BJ
Date: 12/30/2024 9:07:00 PM
" Life is what it is. In any new year, I will take what floats my way." Yes, Andrea, this is the best and healthiest attitude. Accept all that comes our way as we do not have control over many things. Beautifully written. Wish you a Happy New Year.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:13:00 PM
The older I get, the more I realize I have to be satisfied with any good thrown my way. Thanks, Valsa
Date: 12/30/2024 2:49:00 PM
long time since I blew one. but metaphorically speaking it is the poetry we write looking for a place to land. taking root in someones mind or finding a copy machine.
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Date: 12/30/2024 2:38:00 PM
Andrea, Lovely write in fluffy New Year's dream, even if somewhat filled with ennui. Some may see a parting growth in pesky year's weeds, but not me. Love pretty dandelions, past, present, and future. Best New Year's wishes. -Richard
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:14:00 PM
Thanks. I love dandelions
Date: 12/30/2024 2:08:00 PM
Maybe this will be year of good returns on all your charitable work done. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:14:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. I am not all that charitable though!!
Date: 12/30/2024 1:37:00 PM
A wonderfully engrossing tale of what may have become of old, youthful wishes. The poem also deals with learning to let go of wishing, and to take life as it comes. Since we are poised at the verge of a new year, this poem is so meaningful. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:15:00 PM
Thanks. You really got my mesning
Date: 12/30/2024 1:20:00 PM
I just blew some dandelion fluff yer way. Just in case ya need some extry. Wistful poem
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2024 10:15:00 PM
Thanks. I was going for wistful

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