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New Year's Goal Caged

ONE Only New Years Goal for 2025 Poetry Contest
Constance La France


As we springboard into another year, I want to dive in, make a big splash, and come to the surface with a big smile on my face. For me, this will be a first ... if I can submit for a whole year. I want to lose the albatross around my waist. In preceding years I had that ugly bird caged for the first three weeks and then he escaped. For three weeks everything is tailored. I'm counting calories, running, and doing yoga. Everything is in check. The jaybird in me is singing, especially when I see the mirror. Then like Connie's work or clockwork, I fall to the chagrin of that ugly bird. Every year I'm a three-week whirlwind then become a drift. I drift off. Some crises, dramas, or love stories take center stage, and I lose focus. I fall. The curtains are then drawn. And I recoil back into my unhealthy ways, like a lollipop. And the feather one is laughing. Can I gather the willpower this time and surprise that ugly bird?

big bird go away
please stop clinging on to me
it doesn't look nice
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Pachecho Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 5:18 PM
Oh no. The albatross escaped and won. I made it to the eighth day. And again I stumbled at the starting line, like Connie work. Maybe someday I'll get a hold of myself.
Alex Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 2:26 AM
"I want to lose the albatross around my waist." - Great image. Brings to life the Ancient Mariner. Congratulations!
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