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New Year Old Wishes

she sits alone in her moonlit room outcast, as if from society a shadow mimics her moves twigs beneath the breeze shake like fingers grasping at nothingness she hears footsteps falling soft yet quick like strokes on a keyboard pressing on as if echoes in her head resurrect old wishes of a hidden muse that once whispered louder than the bellows of january's cold wind yet silence falls like shadows beneath the crimson rise of dawn

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Date: 4/5/2025 8:48:00 AM
Ok, I've Nancy Drew'd all the evidence I can find about you, you disappeared 9-23 and I went quiet 4-22. I explain why in 2025, poem called 'my soup disappearance reason'. I miss you, want to know your reason. Know u weren't dealt an easy hand ... I'm concerned/I care. This poem is evidence of your special talent, your unique light and you need to know how missed both are. CayCay
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Date: 1/15/2025 10:35:00 AM
Nice poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/12/2025 3:31:00 PM
O Sandy! Ok, melodrama aside this is a nice take on craigy's contest theme. Welcome back
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Date: 1/10/2025 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on andevocative winning write!
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Date: 1/8/2025 9:49:00 AM
Sandy, honored that your pen was awakened for this...you always have a way of sneaking in the side door, like a breeze from some cracked window, undetected/forgotten, until the shiver hits your neck...you could have used softly and quickly, but instead, I think soft & quick emphasize the staccato of the strokes on the keyboard---so much here is borne so subtly - that is your simple, yet complex gift!
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Date: 1/7/2025 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra. My gosh, where have you been? I missed your poetry. Welcome back!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/8/2025 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Edward...i guess hectic life got in the way of my muse, she sleeps more than she is awake... and even when awake time doesn't always allow her to sing! Thank you for your kind words :) hugs
Date: 1/7/2025 12:38:00 PM
This is so awesome, Sandra. GREAT job and how wonderful to see you after so many years never seeing you. Congrats in the contest.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/8/2025 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, good to hear from you....it sure feels like forever since my muse played along! hugs my friend :)

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