New Year Footles

New Year Drinks Beer Gets drunk Heads clunk Drink over Hangover Feels sick Loo quick! Is ill Needs Pill To bed Sore head Morning Dawning Feels sad Looks bad Want drink… Rethink! 1st January 2015
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A   Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:27 PM
:)...LINDA
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 2:29 AM
:-) Hugs Jan xx
Stoner Jr Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 4:36 PM
way to go Jan congrats on this recognition on a fine work. Good to see you on the win list as always.
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Thanks Robert:-) Hugs jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:49 AM
I enjoyed reading these again Jan. congrats and a big hug.
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
Schumacker Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Good morning Jan, Great fun Footle. Nice job. Congratulations on your win! Remember HM stands for Holly Molly!!! A Win A Win!!! I hope you have a wonderful day. Take it easy. Have a tea to celebrate. Earl
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:44 PM
I am having a cuppa at this very minute have had a wee break from soup just catching up on my comments:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your HM. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy, LOVE LINDA
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 2:01 PM
A Footle that's been lived many a time January 1st, 2nd :) xx :)
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Ohhh yes your holiday will be interested to find out where you get to:-) Hugs jan xxx
Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 2:22 PM
I had a few glasses of wine Hogmany. One Brandy on my birthday, Jan 4th, and one pint of Tennant's Lager in town today as I'm still on holiday and I went shopping for some holiday clothes.....
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 2:16 PM
I'm sure James - i rarely drink had a thimble full of wine literally on new years eve with mum and dad but prefer my cuppa any day:-) Hugs Jan x
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 6:53 PM
7 dear, love your Footle, reminds me of my younger years
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 12:55 AM
LOl Guess many of us have had a hangover once and vowed never to do it again - I rarely drink any alcohol now - prefer my cuppa tea these days lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Lovely set of footles, Jan; you won't find me with a hangover...drinks and I never quite been on friendly terms! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Nor me Paul I prefer my cuppa tea any day:-) Hugs jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:55 AM
These are fun Jan!
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Fun but with a timely message Richard:-) Happy new year:-) Hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 5:54 AM
Sure this rings true for many early New Years morn. Creative use of footles. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Sara:-) Hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:25 PM
so clever Jan and very hilarious Hugs 7
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Thanks Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:26 PM
You are super talented at making stories out of footles, Jan. I never did mine that way and I admire your different keen approach. This is a great way to start the new year with this post. Do English pronounce morning and dawning the same? I think I heard something like that when visiting the east coast!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Yes morning and dawning are pronounced the same over here - i so love the simplicity of the footles and have great fun with them - thanks so much for all your encouragement as you can tell i am having the time of my life writing:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:38 AM
What? You already stopped drinking. In Ireland they can't celebrate New Years with drink because they would have to stop in order to start. 40 bottles of whiskey are bought every second by the Irish and that's just the Whiskey.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:41 AM
LOl I rarely drink alcohol Armand and in my present circumstances I am truly glad I don't! Hugs jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:40 AM
- :))) CHEERS, FOR THE NEW YEAR! :))) - hugs Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Bet there were a few sore heads the next day:-( Hugs Jan xx
Beaufort Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:02 AM
You are so funny. I am a boring soul who usually stays home on the 31st. It only took one time with too much fun to make me behave! Thank-you so kindly for your comment and humor.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:08 AM
I HATE new year Duke - never go out and celebrate I find it very depressing and in my current situation I don't need more sadness and stress but I am so so glad to see the back of 2014 which has been my worst year ever:-( Hugs jan xxx
Meade Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Rethink indeed!! Nicely done my dear friend. Your in my thoughts and prayers for this 2015 year . . . continue to be strong and courageous -- you are not alone!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Thanks so much David I do appreciate all your support - happy new year:-) Hugs jan xxx
Mcdaid Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:10 PM
I have to say that you made an unimpressive poetry form entertaining and likeable. Well done.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:20 PM
I adore the footles form - so few words yet they can say so much:-) hugs jan xxx
Brown Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:28 PM
Even a teetotaler such as myself can get a chuckle from your very funny piece Jan. So many, I'm sure would wish they had read this before last night's festivities!
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:33 PM
I rarely drink David but I had the tiniest glass of wine just slightly bigger than a thimble lol to toast the new year in with my parents as we know it will be dad's last. I got asked by my doc last year how many units of alcohol I drank I said about 20 - his eyes looked to the sky until I said - in a year! Prefer my cuppa tea any day:-) Hugs jan xxx
Vaso Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:48 PM
I am happy to but only because is Happy Hour here!!!!!!
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Its always happy hour here - me and my cuppa tea and I'm happy lol - actually glad I don't drink often as I could be in real trouble at the moment!!! hugs jan xxx
Vaso Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:42 PM
I only wish I could bring you smiles now, as this poem brought to me! Hugs
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:47 PM
I'm in a happy frame of mind at the moment Arthur just never know when the tears are going to hit - usually when I am way back after visiting parents but that's understandable - main thing is I'm writing:-) hugs jan xxx
Cooper Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Hi Jan, I really like this. I was just this morning thinking "new year drink beer" and what i could make out of it. Would never have been as good as this. Happy new year Jan Hugs Shane xxx
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:22 PM
We can always have a go and do a collaboration poem one day Sean:-) - they say great minds link alike:-) Hugs jan xxx
Enriquez Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Dear Jan: This is good. Leon
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Thanks Leon happy new year my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Late nights....sun frights......excellent Jan...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 4:48 PM
Thanks Tim:-) hope you had a great New Year:-) Hugs Jan x
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