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New World Wishes

If God were to recreate the Earth He might look back through history And make changes, consider three All children would be conceived in love Neglect is suffered shamefully Too many scarred by poverty Skin color would not be criteria For measuring man’s potential Racial divides? Nonessential Joy would reign in everyone’s life Earth’s bounty would be shared by all Blissful spirits would fill each hall These three may providing a launching pad To make our world a better place And man would revel in God’s grace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/7/2010 9:52:00 PM
Carolyn, I found this one just now, a recent one I somehow missed. These truly are the best wishes one could wish in this world. Very lovely! andrea ps. Wouldn't it be funny if Russel's evil plans actually worked? But nobody would vote for him,just like before?? And we could see him cry all over again on national tv. I hope to see that!(can you believe how he blatantly flirts with "poverty" and his own wife is at home seeing it on tv?)
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:28:00 AM
This is really beautiful Carolyn :) I sure do wish these would come true--very meaning "new world wishes" indeed! Wish you the best in the contest :)
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Date: 4/26/2010 8:35:00 PM
I believe that was exactly His intention from the very beginning. He created man in His image, free to be co-creators with Him. Would He do it again? I'm sure he would. Perhaps we should align ourselves with His vision which you depicted wonderfully here in this write, Carolyn, and a new world could come about. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and thank you for your great comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/24/2010 5:11:00 PM
If only, but you never know. Good luck in Amy's contest Carolyn >> James
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:05:00 AM
Like the evolution of man, this may, if it ever comes, be a matter of a million years. What is wonderful is that you put it out there for people to think about. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/24/2010 9:46:00 AM
I like your idea, if only this could be...
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Date: 4/24/2010 8:47:00 AM
One of your best, enjoyed this write. Into my favs.
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Date: 4/24/2010 8:32:00 AM
God did create this world and man wrecked it in one generatio. Great poem Carolyn.Thanks for your comments on my win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/24/2010 8:29:00 AM
Wonderful poem, great word play my friend... Keep em' coming....:JP]
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