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New Twist on Peter Piper

If Peter Piper got tired of picking pecks of pickled peppers, and packed his jars of peppers, pickled, in boxes of newspaper, placing them in a place that was picked for putting his peppers, then returned to a different place of picking, to pick; What, perchance, would Peter Piper pick, to pick, in place of pickled peppers like the peppers he packed away, and in what place would he put all his new pickings, if his pickled pepper place was packed?

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Date: 3/7/2010 6:10:00 PM
pppp--please, pickle me purple
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Date: 3/6/2010 8:54:00 AM
a very well written take on peter piper,,great one,,the original was one of the first toungue twistes my mother use to recite to me,,,Thank you for reading and leaving your words upon mine,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/4/2010 4:20:00 AM
Great alliteration in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Virginia. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. I wish you the best in the contest should you enter it. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 5:08:00 PM
Interesting slant on a familiar tongue twister. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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