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New Style..Few Haikus About Feelings

My eternal soul
    sizzling out of Heaven
wandering somewhere


Blissful ignorance
    Fairy tale world plays onward
Truth is forgotten


Hidden behind books
    daydreaming these words come true
Waiting for true love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2009 2:34:00 PM
thankyou. You have to excuse me im still new to this. To me it just seems like a haiku because of the form.
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:34:00 AM
Good morning Ariabelle. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2009 10:29:00 PM
thankyou guys for the comments.:)
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Date: 8/16/2009 5:49:00 PM
Very dreamy write you did a great job! I like the feeling it imitates! Laura :)
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Date: 8/16/2009 3:48:00 PM
very well done :)
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Date: 8/16/2009 3:08:00 PM
Interesting Thriple Haiku, Sara
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