New Style..Few Haikus About Feelings

My eternal soul
    sizzling out of Heaven
wandering somewhere


Blissful ignorance
    Fairy tale world plays onward
Truth is forgotten


Hidden behind books
    daydreaming these words come true
Waiting for true love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sierra Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 2:34 PM
thankyou. You have to excuse me im still new to this. To me it just seems like a haiku because of the form.
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 7:34 AM
Good morning Ariabelle. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Sierra Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 10:29 PM
thankyou guys for the comments.:)
Mckenzie Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:49 PM
Very dreamy write you did a great job! I like the feeling it imitates! Laura :)
Knox Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 3:48 PM
very well done :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Interesting Thriple Haiku, Sara
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