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...from a glittering little pot ...little, overflowing soup a lot joy enjoy its amazing taste... with tact let rule charity no waste... ...words from above, deep mind ...world's ear love, depth find

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/3/2025 6:56:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/27/2020 4:41:00 AM

A very interesting poem, many should relate to it. ~~

Sky Poet
Date: 10/27/2020 4:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor for a positive comment. :)