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R recline on the sofa, relax in recliner E entertain romantic thoughts; life couldn't be kinder C cuddle up late in bed, snuggle on couch Y you are my love, molded to you; stubble ouch C comfy now late in life, free from responsibility L love is deep; committment strong_capability E enjoying life_the fruit of early struggles D determined to fulfill our life together_not burst bubble T true to you; constant thoughts E envelope you with what love has wrought E easy is life sleep late_stay up late N now there is a new open door my mate

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Date: 1/29/2011 10:14:00 AM
I agree with Wilma!!! Brilliant...My son is 12 so i have to look forward to!!! Very Nice!!! XOXO Christine
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Date: 1/26/2011 7:20:00 PM
Very nice write. Im a teen an I completely understand.
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Date: 1/24/2011 8:46:00 PM
Sara, you put it so brilliantly in this Acrostic ;-) thank you for your comments as well, it is always appreciated ;-) Wilma
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:38:00 AM
Although some things seem harder as we age, we do enjoy more freedom as well. It's wonderful that you are determined not to "burst the bubble" of a lifelong companion and love. In a way I guess we are all "recycled teens," Sara. We still feel love, but we express it differently. Terrific poem, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 8:46:00 AM
ar'nt we all. jhl
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:22:00 AM
Nice Sara! I feel like a teen again myself! Thank you for sharing! Steve
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:12:00 AM
Speaks of deep and well developed love ..best friends as well as lovers..love,Deb
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:56:00 AM
Sweetly romantic write Sara my friend.. luv the comforting disposition of this piece.. true luv lasts forever through thick and thin.. enjoyed with luv..
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