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New Nest

NEW NEST Before sun awakes, she decorates sky as first guest, unlike huge house of bricks, she encamps in niggling nest. Before lily pop mouth out of petals, like queen she twerks in all weathers, unlike pricy vehicles, she wallows in faithful feathers. Before our breakfast flog from kitchen to table, she chunk up snaps of food over miles, unlike we hang heavy bags to children as morning gift, she brings to kids a wisp of smiles. Before bells of temples ring, she tweet and sing on domes, unlike drafting shorelines to religion and race, cities to cities a bird roams. After the world sleeps, thanks to thee she chants in lay, unlike going to bed with flaws of today and plans of tomorrow, she prays another adventurous day. when storm of wind whisks her nest away, home she tailored by bits without rest, unlike giving up, she gets in making new nest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/27/2016 10:05:00 PM
ayushi pradhan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ayushi Pradhan
Date: 7/31/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thanks! I feel great to be a part of this forum. Well i write since 10th std. I started writing just to let my feelings out but slowly it became an addiction. And now I am looking forward for more exposure in field of writing journels and short stories. I write in simple though stressing words and mostly bring out contrast. Thanks for your views again!
Date: 7/26/2016 6:37:00 AM
Nice Poem...ABC is the wrong form for this type of poem. There is a tab at the top of the page. I can tell you are an experienced writer.
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:40:00 AM
Ayushi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Ayushi Pradhan
Date: 8/2/2016 1:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot!

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