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New Moorings

I slipped loose some time ago it feels, the knot untied, cut; depending on perspective; gently pushed away to float freely, wildly, aimlessly. Some new imagined moorings hauling steady at my line; as they ever did and will. When all the rivers, far seas, oceans have been sailed upon and longings have been sated; I will weary and so yearn to tie up again, awhile, shape this berth into my shrine; 'till, new imagined moorings do haul steady at my line.

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Date: 3/21/2023 10:55:00 AM
Love this nautical write Terry. So finely done! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Linda for your kind comments
Date: 3/18/2023 8:46:00 PM
The last stanza especially is so poetic, Terry. Fine write! Thanks, gw
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:05:00 AM
Hey Thank you Gershon
Date: 3/17/2023 12:19:00 PM
I love this! Clear winner, great imagery and description:)
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:05:00 AM
Thank you so much; just catching up after a turbulent several weeks.
Date: 3/17/2023 9:48:00 AM
Spoken like a true sailor. I enjoyed this write Terry. I can feel the steady undulation of the boat as I read it. The journey and the anticipation of settling in new moorings is a fine completion to your poem. Very nice!
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Date: 3/17/2023 9:42:00 AM
This is excellent poetry, Terry.I look to see it in the winner's circle. Thanks for the enjoyed read. Have a great weekend.
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2023 4:06:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. Apologies for the delayed response; it has been a turbulent few weeks.

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