New Moon

the end draws near

                    on another year

                         yet the new moon shines clear

12/29/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Eslinger Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 7:27 PM
The celestial statement, journaled. Thank you!
Brul Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 1:32 PM
A very uplifting write! Your last last evokes hope.
Lawrence Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:06 PM
Beautiful… poignant and uplifting ! Happy New Year Michelle ! Hugs, Susan :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Hi Michelle, as Planet Earth celebrates the old year going out, and the new year coming in, the busy galaxy above us blesses us with its stars, the milky way and most importantly, a romantic New Moon. Awesome! Hugs and blessings and all the best for 2022 my friend, Jennifer.
Deo Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:40 PM
Happy 2022 Michelle. Am I wrong to notice You are busy away from PS. Lived this haiku because I've been writing more Science-y topics lately. The moon, in your lovely haiku, saunters to another rhythm. Far from the human calendar, teaching about immortal shine & Space-Time. Paz
Peck Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Beautiful thoughts, Michelle :)
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Interesting this year: The lunar month starts on Sunday night - Monday, just after January 1. So the two are aligned. Not always the case. :)
Leffanta Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 10:15 AM
and, believe it or not, the captcha code for his masterful haiku is, "AHA"!!!!
Poet Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Michelle, you've written a fantastic haiku. The rhythm and subject matter were both appealing to me—best wishes for a prosperous new year.
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