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Writtten 31 March 2026 for Illusku: Illustarted Haiku Challenge 4 Poetry Contest of JCB BRU

New Life of Spring


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                           I  I        green buds wake from sleep                           I  I
                            I  I        warm winds kiss youthful leaves~                   I  I
                             I  I       life begins anew.                                              I  I
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George Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 2:16 AM
I can feel life waking up from winter's sleep with spring rain and wind and trees flaunting new leaves and buds. Lovely illusku. Congratulations on your top win dear friend.
Jones Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 1:02 AM
Wow! Your illusion is creative and deserving of your first place win! Congratulations Krishnanand!
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:41 PM
Very pretty. The poem and the image. I see lots of people doing spring time!
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